Don't Let 'Em Say You Ain't Beautiful - Comments

oh la la,
i can practically taste the animosity rolling.
i can't wait for the next chapter :D

Love this
: D

you're welcome for the comment :)
ah! i found it cute how he referred to himself in third person :) haha
i can't wait for the next one and to see what happens :D

Aw, I feel a tad sorry for Marshall. He poured his heart out to her and still got rejected.
But Evangeline's gotta do what she feels is right/best for herself.
Besides, you said you got a way to get them back together, so I'm not worried.
I 'awed' when Marshall gave Evangeline the key's to her place. Sad moment for all.
So, did she not notice the box Marshall put on the table? It was an actual ring wasn't it?
And ooooh, is she preggos? Something to do with Kim reappearing and Evangeline wanting Marshall back?
I can't wait to read what happens next!

aww they broke up!!! But i kno Eminem rap is gonna be dope cause he go.

WHAT?!?!?!
Is it over?
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Great update.
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Haha I've never been mentioned in an author's not before. Thanks for updating so quickly, it was an amazing start to my day!

Holy shit that was fast! You're awesome!

Okay, so Marshall seems even more endearing with the fact that he's so protective over Evangeline.
I see where his anger comes from. He wanted to keep her outta the drama but he was unable to stop her from being pulled in.
He hates that he 'failed' her and then he lashes out on her... which was a no-no by the way.
But I'm glad he's regretting the fact that he scared the crap outta her. Now he can make things right.
Phew, so he's in Detroit now. Hopefully he'll be able to get through to her.
Then he can diss Ja Rule again, as a way to avenge Hailie and Evangeline. :P

Thank you for updating... you put me out of my misery :)
I love this story.
Again Thanx

more updates soon! haha x

Yes! An update! This makes me happy. Very, very happy. But why'd you make Evangeline be so stubborn? First the thing about her quiting her job, now this? Aw well. Its one of her traits that I love about her, but I hope she caves soon. Marshall needs to come up with a brilliant plan real fast. Just like your next update! Lol

you accidentally posted it an extra two times :)

oh my god. absolutely amazing :D
he's sweet but he needs to do it in another way. she has to forgive him!

Stupid, stupid Marshall. Letting his anger and hurt pride get the best of him.
He let Slim Shady out at the worst possible moment.
For a second there, I thought he was gonna hit Evangeline or something. I'm glad he didn't.
I kinda wanna know what he did that effed his hand up so bad.
He didn't use the gun and he obviously didn't diss Ja Rule yet so... it's a mystery.
Anyway, yay! I'm so glad I found this!
There aren't many well written Eminem stories on here so it's good to see one.
Can't wait to read more of this story!

I think you capture, both Slim Shady and Marshall, very well!
I adore this story :]

looooooovvvvvveeeeee. Poor Marshall, and poor evangelie x

Omg i love this story can't wait for the next update :)

That sucks.

this is the first Eminem one I've seen, good work and keep it up!

he damn well better make it up to her lol
love it :D