awwwwh this is awesome! it's a story thats not completely about gangs and the streets! lol i love it aldready! but ummmm......it should be more detailed. xD lol because the way you write him is pretty damn sexy and masculine. ^_^ mhhhm BREA K OFF A PIECE'A DAT!
OMG i cant believe the world is finding out about her and marshall now and its right in the beginning of the story. Please update soon like really soon. maybe in the next two hours or maybe tomarrow. haha