The Warrior - Comments

Wooo GO DUNCS!!!
I <3 that boy. Seriously. He's not allowed to fuck up.. not that i can see him ever doing anything but being a perfect gentleman.
I'm gunna need for him to bring out the serial killer knowledge though =D Why does that hobby of his completely turn me on? Yea, i dunno either lol

Haha "I'm shy and quiet"
So cute, Duncs (:

"She's cute, Duncs. Do work."
YES.

You're amazing, btw.
I wouldn't be able to update two in one day. I'm struggling with only posting one as is. Bluh.

And wtf do you mean by adding a part two? Want to clarify that? Kthnx.

love the story :D
Can't wait till Brent sets his eyes on her.
yum. Drama.

A date with Duncan eh? Hmm...wonder how that will turn out...anyway, another great chapter! Looking forward to the next! <3

I like this, I think it's cute that she is practically the modern day hippie...sans the drugs and bad hygiene. She lives from paycheck to paycheck and tries to keep everyone pleased with her work. It's nice that her first one on one encounter with Brent involved him helping her and showing her that he's not a mindless caveman incapable of being polite.
Looking forward to your next update.

Too short. I demand longer chapters.
And Irene should go to a hookah bar or something.
I dunno why I suggested that, I just it.

Anyway. MOAR.

awww, shes falling for him! (:
cant wait to see what happens (:

Irene is so falling for him.
She won't be able to deny it for long.
I love this, as you already know.
More soon!

red paint on floors - reminds me of how my french project ended up all over the floor last week, my mom spent hours scrubbing my hardwood floors...if only we had Brent to help

Lovely little interlude with Brent actually acting human for the 1st time in this story!
Irene is funny, getting so worked up over the spill. And if she had the drop cloth right there, why didn't she have it down? LOL I'm kinda critical, aren't I. There have been many, many pain spills in my past..

I really like the different take you have on Seabs in this.

PS: I updated =p

Interesting...I'm curious to see where this goes. Can't wait for the next! <3

YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYEYES.
Love it,
AS ALWAYS.
Muahahha.
She shall fall for him.
No matter how cave-many he is
>:)

DUNCS!!!!!!!!
How the hell is he single?? He's seriously like the sweetest, most genuine seeming guy.. Yea, there's the serial killer thing, but that actually makes me like him more LOL Yes, i am cracked.
What the hell is Seabs' prob?? Really, being a pissy bitch doesn't become him.

Yea.. i just realised i didn't actually comment on this. Ooops.

really, really talented writing :) you've got me hooked!

this seems like a very interesting story.
i cant wait to see where you take it.

I love this. The portrayal of the wives is spot on..No one seems to write them as what they really are except for this story. Update soon !

moar, I guess

LOVE.
LOVE.
LOVE.
LOVE.
LOVE.
LOVE.

This is such a sexy story! YESSS.

"So, you're kind of like a modern day hippie?" Carmen asked, true confusion on her face. Dude, L-M-F-A-O. Oh boy.

UPDATEEE.

I love this already! And, it's definitely going to be interesting to see how Irene interacts with everyone when she's so against hockey and violence. And, you've definitely got the Seabs/Duncs bromance right. Those two are connected at the hip! Can't wait for more!

I'm intrigued...awaiting the next one! <3