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i love their first date!! =D
now. more updates soon right ? =)

UPDATE!!!!! please please please please please! (I'll love you forever if you do)

It's probably for the best that she took the high road and didn't say anything, if their 'engagement' gets out, it'd just give them more fire to work with.
I liked the Kiwi reference again, it's funny to read how Jordan misinterprets something because he's not familiar with her culture and references.
For the playoffs, in the west, I'd be looking at the Hawks and the Sharks...even if I'm not a Sharks' fan and in the east, I'd watch the Pens and the Caps...again, not a huge fan of theirs either.

ok, I feel the need to correct myself. I do get on my computer everyday to check facebook and emails anyways, as I have been done since i got my laptop, the only times I dont check is when the rents take it away. However, your story is like the first thing I check.

Btw, this is totally off topic, but have you read my stories? It's okay if you havent. There arent any hockey fics though, i'm not the fanfic writing type, but i think you'll like them.

Okay, i really have to go now. My dads yelling at me, telling me that i have to be at the soccer field soon for my game.
BYE!

I LOVED it chica!!!! And i like Jordan. Personally, I'd like the Preds to go all the way cuz I'm from nashville, but if the Pens or the Hawks win I'd be completely ok with that.

Update Soon! I mean I get on my computer everyday just to see if you've updated. Your story is like my fav right now.

I liked it! She showed those bitches lol. As far as the playoffs go, I am for the Hawks going all the way but I would be happy to see the Penguins up there too! Can't wait for the next update! <3

great update!
more please!
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option A

Nooooooooooooooo! dont change the story. I Like, no wait, LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's different than all the other and damn funny. Dont make me choose, cuz i'm gonna be stubborn and chose "or"!!!!

I knew she would start to fall for Jordan.
I guess his constant presence would do that.
That and they just seem to be a fun couple.
I'm going to just go with option B...though I have no idea what option A or B for that matter are.
Can't wait for next update though.

Hmmm....I'm gonna say Option...................A! Can't wait for the next update! <3

Awesome story, your a good writer ^__^.

thats not fair.
i pick....... OPTION B. NO A. NO. WAIT.
ugh.
final answer: Option b.
no im gonna post this before i change my mind.

Can't believe Jordan went out and bought a ring.
But, looks like the wedding is off since Max scored the game winning goal of the series. Still can't wait to see if she does give the ring back or if Jordan still tries to win her affections.
Can't wait for the next update to see what happens!

Oh my jesus, Jordan is serious! Wooooow. Can't wait to see what happens next!! <3

I love the playful banter between Jordan and Kris.
I think that they're fun to read about but, it also sounds like Kris might be catching Jordan's fiancee's interest.
Really love reading these updates.

Ahahahaha her and Jordan crack me up!!! More please!!!!! <3

oooh new update! i love how they were talking over the phone. haha
"phone sex"
okay, so. more updates please! =)

"You know there's no way I'm taking no for an answer," Jordan was still arguing the validity of his proposal half an hour later when Lucy and Max entered the apartment.
I think that Jordan will have to play his best if he wants to get married to his "fiancee" now that they've struck a deal. Otherwise they just get to forget about the proposal.
Seriously love the humor there is between the two. It's fun to read.
Can't wait for the next update.

Ahahahaha this is hilarious!! Looooooooved it! Can't wait for the next!!!! <3