July 1st, 2010 at 10:08am
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I know I've told you this before, but I absolutely LOVE the story. I love everything about it, so you better update soon cause I wanna read some more of your awesomeness storyJune 22nd, 2010 at 07:34am
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Hahahaha Jordan's a cheeseballlllll. But I love it, its so funny! I can't wait to read more!!! <3333June 22nd, 2010 at 12:05am
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wohooooo congrats for the All Whites!
Unfortunately Germany lost against Serbia, which SUCKED ASS!!!!! how inconsistent can one referee be?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! that stupid Serbian guy should've at least gotten yellow for his attempted INTENTIONAL HAND PLAYING! (I don't know the exact english translations to the soccer terms, so sorry if something is incorrect!) Ugh
anyway, we need to beat Ghana or Serbia and Australia have to tie and then we could, too, but that's unlikely/too lucky, so we're going with a WIN! YES WE ARE!
aaaanyway...
I'm thinking of spoiling the outcome for me by looking up if Jordan scored the game winner or not, but I'm still contemplating, so not too sure
but he's just too precious, I swear...
and haha for Sid cockblocking Jordan the one time Ray decides to go along with him! hahahahaha ;DJune 21st, 2010 at 07:00pm -
Lmao
Jordan is such a horn-dog.
Even in his sleep.
xDDJune 21st, 2010 at 04:48pm -
Hahahaha teasing Tanger and Jordan is too much fun! Woo, I feel special!! Thank you for updating!! I can't wait to read more!! <33333
PS- As for the Hawks winning the Cup, all I have to say is "WOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" and "Its about damn time!!!"June 16th, 2010 at 12:16am -
soccer is HUGE out here in Germany :D
and we just beat Australia four-nothing... which put us in quite the dancing mood, but I don't know about you, depends on how much you like the Aussies :)
aaaanyway, congrats to NZ for that point, this year we're going to see a lot of the "underdog" teams kicking some real good ass! WOHOOOOO (but Germany's still gonna win the cup, so ;P )
and now on note to the story:
haha I can imagine that Jordan would be all "sad" about that rule hehe I can just envision him looking like that too!
not so happy that the pens lost, but what are we to do? you're the story writer, the fate of the team is in YOUR hands! :PJune 15th, 2010 at 07:11pm -
Of course
She has to be a gold-digger because she showed up out of no-way right?
Lmao
Girls are so petty.June 15th, 2010 at 05:30pm -
Aww this was cute!! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
PS- GO HAWKSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!June 4th, 2010 at 11:00pm -
YOOOU. made the beginning of this depressing and then the end cute. Do work, kid.
<3 MORE.May 27th, 2010 at 10:34pm -
"You're a Kiwi and I'm a Penguin. Us flightless birds should stick together."
Gotta love Jordan's logic lol. He's such a cheeseball but I love it. XD Can't wait for the next chapter!!! <3May 20th, 2010 at 12:53am -
I AM A DICK.
But now I have caught up and BITCH YOU NEEDA WRITE SOME MORE.
Now I'm off to read your Keith oneshot you didn't tell me about before the game starts!May 12th, 2010 at 03:09am -
love how funny this is cant wait for more!May 11th, 2010 at 06:03pm
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Awh...he's so sweet!
Update soon!May 11th, 2010 at 08:38am -
oh my god, I'd just... di
whew, getting serious there, huh, jord? whow
okay. well then lets see what she's gonna say, huh?May 11th, 2010 at 08:26am -
Awwwwwwwww this is super cute!!! Makes me wanna pinch Jordan's cheeks lol. I can't wait for more!!! <3May 11th, 2010 at 06:46am
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So, very late comment but, I liked learning about why she did move out to Pittsburgh.
I think it's cute how Jordan and her behave with each other. They're teasing but, they seem relaxed around each other.
Can't wait to see how meeting her friends and her finding a way to tell her friends about her 'relationship' with Jordan.May 5th, 2010 at 02:48am -
I love this story~
:D
Keep the Staal coming!
Can't wait for more updates.April 30th, 2010 at 09:23am -
That was a really good fluffy chapter! And as excited as i am that the hawks are going to round 2, I'm kinda not cuz that means that the Preds aren't :(
But I am happy that the Pens have made it to round 2!!!!!!
update soon please!April 28th, 2010 at 05:06am -
Cute chapter!! I'm so happy to see that the Hawks are going to round 2, along with the Penguins! But anyway, I can't wait for the next update! <3April 28th, 2010 at 12:31am
I want to know what happens in Philly.
Do ittttttt.