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  • Taylor;

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    Aw, Jordan with baby girl Staal is adorable.
    Kara's not good for Marc feel bad that he's going to end up hurt by her. She should at least be respectful to him and break off the engagement if she wants to be with Sid. Cheating is never okay.
    Loved the update.
    February 25th, 2010 at 06:00pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    February 25th, 2010 at 01:08pm
  • Rylie_

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    Baby girl Staal is so cute!!

    Kara is gonna cheat on Marc with Sid, I feel it coming.

    Jordan and Phoebe are good right now but I see a fight in their future. Things are going too good for them right now.

    Can't wait for more :)
    February 25th, 2010 at 12:50pm
  • Lady Looch

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    Chloe mimicked her father’s actions, staring back up at him with the same big blue eyes that both her Daddy and big brother possessed. With one tiny hand wound tightly around his pinky, Jordan slowly rocked his daughter as he sat in the plush recliner that sat in the corner of her nursery.
    AWWW! gimmeee baby staaaal.

    Hi." He smiled, waiting patiently for a response. "Hi." He repeated, staring down at her expectantly.

    "Baby can't talk yet." Jordan smiled with a light laugh. "She doesn't know how." He explained. "She'll learn just like you did."

    *SQUEAK!!!* OH MY GOD!

    Marc held up a pink Rangers onesie with a happy grin to his brother.
    oh god. those staal boys and getting enough representation in their families. pleaaase marc. that little girl knew even in the womb that the rangers suck!

    “Hey Kara.” Sidney blushed a violent red as she kissed his cheek softly. It was no secret that Sidney Crosby had a soft spot in his heart for Marc Staal’s fiancé and damned the day that he got to her before him. “How’s Marc?” He asked softly.
    RAAAAAAAWR! DITCH THE STAAL! GO FOR THE HOTTIE!

    Needless to say, there was a family pool going on how long the couple would last before they called off the wedding.
    ouch. bahahaha. sounds like its going to be successful

    Hours later, many of the guests had left sans Sidney who was dead asleep on the couch with Dylan laying contently on his chest, sucking on Sidney’s thumb for a change instead of his own.
    precious <3

    ohh babe this was soooooo good!
    I love the staal family and I agreee that kara needs to be with sid.
    i wish i could comment more but i got nosey roomies and some shit going down
    but you know I love it.
    more soon! <3
    February 25th, 2010 at 04:58am
  • shopaholic

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    i love this story and i think that marc and kara should stay together they may argue a lot but im sure they do a lot of loving too but i have nothing against sidney and kara...lol....as long as marc finds someone...the pictre of baby chloe that u have is sooo adorable...and something about jodran and a baby makes me happy....

    keep going and update soon!
    February 25th, 2010 at 04:12am
  • nolongerhere

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    the picture of Chloe definitely had me aww-ing when i opened this up.
    ahaha
    good update(:
    February 25th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • Jon Toews

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    yay baby :)

    and omg can you say love triangle.
    im excited to see where this goes!
    February 25th, 2010 at 12:11am
  • PensRock

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    First let me say, that is the most beautiful baby I've ever seen.

    Everything about his daughter thrilled and frightened him to no extent. Jordan Staal had no idea what to do with a baby girl. - -Oh that's so Jordan. I could so see him being nervous.

    Look, I know that Phoebe really wanted to be here to ask you along with me, but I figure now is as good a time as any.” Jordan exhaled deeply. “But Pheeb and I were hoping you would want to be Chloe’s God father? - - OMG what a good choice - do not pick a staal for that job!

    It was no secret that Sidney Crosby had a soft spot in his heart for Marc Staal’s fiancé and damned the day that he got to her before him. - GO KARA

    “Nothing sexier than a man with a baby.” - - soooo true.

    Sidney who was dead asleep on the couch with Dylan laying contently on his chest, sucking on Sidney’s thumb for a change instead of his own. - - Now that's an adorable picture.

    “But I’d gladly settle for a blow job.” He gave her a shit-eating grin. OH SO JORDAN STAAL - there's no doubt in my mind that he's serious

    Such a good update!
    Sid <3 s Kara
    LOVE baby Chloe!
    February 25th, 2010 at 12:02am
  • sweeterthansweettea

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    aww Chloe Marie is such a pretty name :)
    I can sense some drama between Sidney and Kara lol
    I predict that Marc comes back to the house and sees them together
    more, please :D
    February 24th, 2010 at 09:57pm
  • musiclovr101

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    aww big men with little babies are soo cute....I really enjoy this story, I hope Marc smartens up and kicks Kara to the curb , but idk if i see her w. sid...... well thats up to you to decide, keep it up and keep it frequent pleas =P
    February 24th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • MissLis

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    something about Jordan (tall men in general actually... no, scratch that, MEN in general) with newborn babies ist just... indescribably sweet... I can only imagine how cute it must look to see one of the Staal brothers with their nephew :)

    "Good thing I married into your family. It's so incredibly entertaining!"
    Word on that one! Hehe, I laughed 5 minutes straight on this one

    and go Jordan for being "sneaky" and putting Kara and Sid in the same room...
    and actually, go Marc for dropping 15 !!!!!!!!!!!(...) grand on an engagement ring. Impressive! (But it's not like he doesn't have the money, eh? I'd love to see what ring Sid proposes to Mrs. Lucky one day... if that thing isn't the size and prize of a house everyone will call him cheap... and maybe they'd be right to do so... we'll see :P)
    February 24th, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • Jessica;

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    Kara bear.
    You write the best fluff ever.
    For reals.
    More soon. <3
    February 22nd, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • Jon Toews

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    haha love the chapter title. lol.
    and i adore how they first met, that was cute.
    Cant wait for the baby girl :]
    February 21st, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • Taylor;

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    I kept reading about your Jordan story in the author's note on Language of Love but, couldn't find the link.
    Glad you put it in the epilogue, Jordan as a daddy just screams cuteness. Can't wait to read about his baby girl being born.
    February 21st, 2010 at 12:15pm
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    Yeah, Jordan got the girl...for now. Sorry, I was totally picturing that as a supenseful moment, sort of thing. Loving this so far, can't wait for the next update.
    February 21st, 2010 at 09:43am
  • Lady Looch

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    “Mommy!” He would giggle as Jordan pretended to be a shark, dipping the lower half of his face into the water, the hair of his faux-hawk being a fin as he advanced on his little boy.
    ohmygod. can you say fricken adorable?? jordan as a dad <3 sigh. so cute.

    sigh
    i know i fail.
    i only have one quote but I am SOO tired.
    but don't get me wrong.. LOVED this.
    this story is fucking awesome.
    and seriously phoebe and jordan would get dirty in the pool.
    pshh nymphos. *shakes head*
    GIMMEEE BABY STAAL! OKAY!? YEAH!
    more soon pleasseee?
    maybe I'll have a better comment then!
    February 21st, 2010 at 07:05am
  • Rylie_

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    The flashback thing really cleared up somethings for me so thanks for that.

    I adore this story so much. The chemistry between Jordan and Phoebe is really nice. Jordan seems alittle cocky but that's sexy.

    Can't wait for more :)
    February 21st, 2010 at 06:19am
  • thisafterlife

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    that was a good update =] <3
    February 21st, 2010 at 03:46am
  • Chickydee6

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    Loved it! It was so adorable! Please update soon, I don't think I can wait much longer :P
    February 21st, 2010 at 03:33am
  • nolongerhere

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    aww
    sweet
    February 21st, 2010 at 03:16am