Thrills To Spare - Comments

i love this story its great!! i also adore jordan and him playing with a baby girl is just sooo cute!! i cant wait till the baby girl is here....please please please update soon!

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i loved the flashback...i couldn't stop laughing at the ending of it!
can't wait for more!

I'm glad you cleared up the Eric connection. - I can only imagine what a blow it was to Jordan's ego to have her (me) more interested in Eric than him. I think he probably thinks pretty highly of himself. Tell me why I find that so attractive. LOL

So what are the chances that I can get your big brother’s number off of you?” She asked, looking up at him through kohl lashes, an innocent grin pulling at her lips.
“Slim.” He smiled down at her. Jordan Staal was not going to let this one slip away - That just seems so Jordan - I love this.

How about, you give me the rest of the night to convince you that it’s my number you want?” He asked, leaning in awfully close. Close enough to smell the alcohol on her breath from her last drink, “the leg spreader”.
“You’re on.” - - Love the drink drink choice and Jordan's line, and the fact that she agrees. This banter is so adorably sexy. - so fun that he can tease her about wanting Eric's number years later after they have kids together.

Phoebe eyed him up, biting her lip as she watched his muscles move and flex under his skin, his bicep flexing as he held onto the railing, slowly walking down the stairs. - - nice snap shot there Kara. Yum Yum!!!!!

“I’m tired of your dreamy eyes, and adorable chin, and hot body, and delicious voice… and that way you play with your baby. All of it – ” She paused to sigh, “total turn off after three years of marriage. I’ll start looking for a newer model.” - - Hahahaha - yeah right. Love this. big sigh - she certainly knows all his best qualities.

I can't pinpoint it exactly, but Jordan seems just the slightest bit cocky, even during sex and I think that is incredibly sexy and very much how I imagine him. Wait did I just admit that I imagine him having sex?. LOL

Very sweet ending!!!!!!! More Please!!!!

Love how you worked Marc in there ;-). What a power couple you are with Marc Staal. Bri, you and me, we'll keep those Staal boys in check. LOL

I love this.
I like who you started the story off with them married and with kids.
Its a different way to start a story.
Dylan is so cute :)
update soon!

Totally subscribing!! Update soon!! :)

Okay, I've been absent from reading your stories for some reason, I have no excuse so I won't give you one ( not that this even phases you or anything because you have tons of amazing, dedicated readers, but I feel the need to explain) but all I can say is that i have alot of catching up to do, but back to this story... So before reading this all I knew about Jordan was that he played for the Penguins & that he had a brother Eric, I had no idea he was so adorable... Okay I'm still off topic rambling, sorry so anyway I enjoyed this first chapter I can tell this story is going to be nothing short of amazing, and I predict that Phoebe and Eric might get a little scandal stirring up soooon!!

Update soon!
xo <3

This was a really great start!!!!! I am holding back all suspicions until I read a couple more chapters LOL

Looking forward to more!

yay new story :) Its just too cute, i love babies! Dylan is so precious.

Only the first chapter and I love it already.

I have a feeling Pheebs and Eric are goin' to get into some trouble together.

Jordan as a dad is so stinking cute. His kids are going to be clones of him.

Can't wait for more :)

definitely a different start to the story but i can't wait to see where it goes!

So cutteee
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This was cute!

Now I just need to google Jordan Staal.
XDD

ok. everything is way too perfect. something has to be going wrong somewhere. Although I was under the impression that their was an affair going on..

Dylan Eric Staal was a clone of his father, and Jordan Staal had the pictures to prove it - - A dream come true Jordan's baby and he looks just like his daddy!

“Cuddles!” He squealed, being sneaky, knowing his Daddy wouldn’t say no and this way he could sleep in Mommy and Daddy’s bed. Jordan paused with a sigh before turning on his heel to head back over to his own bedroom. - - Just what I like to see. Giant Jordan turns to mush at the hands of his boy. So sweet.

If I wanted to cuddle when I was your age, all I got was a noogie on the head and a slap on the butt by big bad Uncle Eric. I still can’t figure out why your Mommy insisted on giving you his name. - - Because he's adorable Jordan. He's not you, but adorable none the less.

Dylan cuddled up close to his father’s chest, watching with great interest as he traced the cleft in his Daddy’s chin with his tiny finger, having the same cleft on his tiny face. - - I love his chin cleft and I love that Dylan has it too!!!!!

And as Jordan appeared in the archway of the family room, his hair tousled as his bare chest exposed as well as the fine, white blonde hairs that lead from his belly button to his sleep pants, Phoebe lost her train of thought. - - I swear if I was married to that boy, I'd never be able to concentrate! Very nice visual!!!!! Can I officially request more of this?

“How’s my baby girl?” He asked, walking around to the front of the couch, crouching down and placing his dinner plate size hands on her tummy, leaning down to kiss it tenderly. - - OMG the thought of Jordan being like this makes me weak in the knees. Not sure if this story is good for my heart.

Seeing Jordan with a baby did all sorts of things for Phoebe, a side of him she had no idea existed until she revealed to him her pregnancy about three months after returning from their European honeymoon. - - I know right? Unbelievable. Freaking Unbelievable

“When is E coming up?” She asked softly, referring to Jordan’s older brother, whom she loved dearly.
“He’ll be here around one, I’ll still be at practice though, so don’t run away with him, okay?”
- Eric is coming? JUMP UP AND DOWN. I hope all the staal boys show up.
- Don't run off with him? Tempting, but if I have Jordan, who needs Eric LOL

“We met because you asked me if you thought you could get his number off of me.” He said pointedly, looking down at her with the same eyes he gave her son. - - I hope I get this full story in a flash back.

Brianna and I went shopping yesterday and you know how she gets around baby clothes. - - OK Brianna is one lucky girl. Not as lucky as me. I already told her, I might be married to Eric, but I'm still going to crush on Eric. I can't help myself. LOL

“Brianna’s pregnant.” - - And so it begins!!!! The next generation of Staals inhabits the earth. I don't know about you, but the more Staals the better!!!!!

Love this story!!!!!!
Love Jordan - because he's a dad, and a good one at that!!!!
Love Phoebe - cuz she not only shares my name but her ability to drool in the presence of a shirtless Jordan
Love Dylan - cuz he looks just like his Dad and cuz he's adorably sweet and cuddles with his dad to sleep.
Love Eric - well just cuz he's Eric Staal of course.

MORE PLEASE!!!!!

At first I didn't get where you were going with the Eric thing,I thought they were having an affair.

awwww. Jordy is soo cute.... and i have a feeling staal baby's will always be cute..... i'm not a huge ginger fan but they can rock it.
I really like the story itss ssooooooo cute. it makes me giggle.

i'm sad jordan got left off of team canada.....
but @ least Eric made it....

I love the idea of Jordan as a dad! This is such a great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens!

I can't wait to see where this is going.
Great first chapter! :)

Actually, mine, they are attached to my head, making them mine." He explained,
hahahaha cuuuutteee <3

Jordan and Phoebe, Jordan’s wife and mother to his child, would love when they would walk into their Pittsburgh home and Dylan would tilt his head at them cutely before squeaking in his cute voice, ‘mine?’
ohmygod. that is the CUTEST thing ever. I love it.. miiineeee???

“Broken!” He announced, pointing at a giraffe that was missing an ear. “Broken!” He pointed gravely with wide eyes.

“I got it, I got it.” He insisted, picking up the flawed, delicious animal and popping it into his mouth. “See? All better.” He insisted, making Dylan giggle before double fisting two crackers, gnawing on each one alternately.
<3333 stop with the cute baby stufff! okay. no. don't. but still.. why are you so good at writing this stuff!?!?

Dylan stated, leaning back in his highchair and sticking one of his hands down his diaper.
bahahaha. already like his dad.

“Don’t worry, baby, I’d at least wait for you to go on long trip to do that. I mean, we’d need time to pack and whatnot.” She explained tenderly.
hahahaha. true statement :D

“I would say it has something to do with this.” Phoebe flashed her timeless Tiffany ring to him. “Or maybe something with the baby we have sleeping down the hall, or the one sleeping between us.” She said smartly.
that is super sweet. i love babies. look at what you are doing to me...

“And the beautiful Mrs. Staal.” Eric winked as Phoebe entered the room. She’d be lying if she didn’t put a little more effort into her appearance this morning, wearing a flattering top and spritzing her favorite perfume on her neck.
RAWR! ericfuckingstaal. do me. please. sigh. i am a slut.

Brianna and I went shopping yesterday and you know how she gets around baby clothes.”
*LOUD SCREAM* ME. AND. ERIC. FUCKING. STAAL. I LOVE MY LIFE.

“Bad!” He squeaked with an accusatory finger up at Eric who dropped his jaw.
bahahahahaha bad uncle eric.

“Good to know my wife is still here.” He winked over Eric’s shoulder at Phoebe who blushed a violent pink.
bahahahaha. he has me. thats all i will say.

“There’s something I gotta tell you guys.” He sucked in a deep breath. Jordan and Phoebe exchanged looks before he finally spit it out.
“Brianna’s pregnant.”
I. ALMOST. HIT. THE. FUCKING. FLOOR. i've always wanted to have a staal! ohmygod!!!!!!!!! all of my dreams... coming true! bahahah!

ohmygod. ohmygod.
i ams oooo happy that you posted this. i am in love. head over heels already. this is so good. i love the fluffiness. and seriously, phoebe gets to live out her dream. HOT DAMN.
phoebe and i are populating the world with little staals. EEEKKK!!!!
more soon. seriously. I love this. you better write this all the time. FAVVY!
except for tony.. but that goes without saying. lets be honest ;)
loveeee this so much! seriously. more. NOW!
btw. my voice hurts from screaming so loud.