Freak Show - Comments

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Well I know for sure now there's something about Frank. Shannon acted kinda weird...

Anyway yeah cliffhanger woah. Can't wait for next update :)

Oh snap!!!! what gonna happen next!!!! O_O what Frank is gonna do with Jessica????? omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

O_O <---- this is me right now......

uh oh! she got caught. wonder what frank's gonna do. hmmmm this will be interesting!

more soon!

<3

I feel soooooo sorry for the brothers, I can imagine how hard it is :( poor Shannon though for being unable to help. Jessica will pull through though, I have a feeling she will :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Chella xx

Aw if someone was treating my brother the way Frank is treating Jared, I would commit bloody murder. Poor Shannon must feel so helpless. Loving this story, please update soon!!

i got so excited when i got an email saying you updated ='D awesome chapter- but uh oh frank :O

just started reading this, some of the chapters with frank abusing jared are a bit sick but theyre great! Please keep updating xx

Good update, aww poor lad must have been starving! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

I don't even wanna look at the time, it's so late. Remember the 6-hour time difference and let me know what time it was that I posted this xD

No real criticism from me this time around. I really liked it :) Jessica's so sweet and I just wanna hug her. I like how the thought thing works too.

Keep up the good work :D Send me pictures!

Oh my gosh more soon
I love this story
clara

I love this story, seeing the subscription update always makes me smile :D hope more chapters are on their way soon ;)

YAY Jess is a good person!!! now Jared to the rescue!!! ^_^

i have a feeling that guy from the front is going to be a problem. and besides, frank has his ways about him to see what's going on with his freaks. and a torch is a flashlight right? not like a legit piece of wood with fire lol

more soon!

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Nevermind the (-) from before. Now I feel stupid and you're just that much more awesome :)

Poor Jared :( Stupid Frank! SAVE HIM, SHANNON AND JESSICA! lol I loved the line "Am I that bad a shag?" Priceless.

Still wondering what's so special about Frank. Ooh, excitement.

Beautifully done <3 Can't wait for the next update.

Did I ever make you that banner I promised? If not, I owe you one lol although I have too much school crap to do before I can get to it.

Anyway...how did I do this before?

(-) Sometimes, it seems a bit unrealistic. It's about an angel, silly! Yeah, I know that, but I mean unrealistic in the actions taken/thoughts. If you want me to elaborate, let me know. It's late and I'm tired and on my phone so I won't right now.

(+) This is brilliant. I mean, wow. I had an angel-related idea that has a sligt similarity to this but now so much so that if I post it, it'll seem like I stole from you lol. Anyway I love Frank's wickedness and the whole communication in thought thing. I don't know, it's just so cool and so well-written.

I am curious as to how the heck Frank has so much power. It's really hard for me to imagine him talking like he does lol I feel so bad for Jared.

On to chapter five :)

btw by when I said "i have no idea where they are, I meant frank and jared not the details xD lol ok now I'm gonna yea ok

I promised :D This is me after the first chapter...

[-] I get obsessive over detail so I'd like to se more of it. I have no idea where they are. Just generally more detail would be nice.

[+] Two of the most beautiful men alive in one story!? Wow xD Sexy lol I'm dying to know more. Why Jared's suddenly...you know, human-ish or something. And that girl in the description...what is she gonna do to help!? Why is Frank so psycho?! Duuude why was it that I haven't been reading this? xD

Love ya, gonna go read the other chapters now <3

This story is great I love it :) Frank makes me sick though. Jessica need to sort him out. And save Jarrod :)

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Chella xx

Poor baby. :c
I'm sorry but I'm still in love with evil Frank. :3
I want Jessica to kick his ass though lol.
More soon I beg you!
<3 Tina

Wow Frank is so evil! And to look a his little face you wouldn't think it lol! Poor Jared needs to get out of there and soon- come on Jessica!!! What's she waiting for? Please update soon!!