Cross My Heart - Comments

  • PAGE SEVEN.
    i'll leave you here.
    (:
    August 18th, 2010 at 09:32pm
  • aha, or maybe not.. well.. that backfired...

    there's an episode of "Teen mom" happening in my kitchen right now...minus the whole "teen mom" part..
    my brother and his gf are having relationship problems... maybe she's finally realizing, after living here for 3 years, not paying rent, not having to buy grocies, having full acsess to the car or truck and not even having to do her own laundry,.. that MAYBE it's time to move out..
    maybe..
    August 18th, 2010 at 09:32pm
  • and just for shits and giggles..
    page seven?

    I think so.. (:
    August 18th, 2010 at 09:30pm
  • Chapter 20
    eeeeeehhhh. I don't want this to be over, but I am excited to move on to "IHMWY"
    it's very bitter sweet..
    hhaha, I was going to say "that's probably biased" when I read about Keith being Airin's favorite character :P
    when I think of Finley being "energized" I think of him in an energizer bunny outfit :P
    haha, I love Finley as a smart ass :P
    I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ENDED IT LIKE THAT!
    ahh, THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY.
    i'm super sad that it's over.. but i'm looking forward to where you take things in the next part..
    i'll start reading it after I get over the shocker of an ending/cliffhanger..so, probabl sometime later tonight.. ;)
    August 18th, 2010 at 09:29pm
  • Chapter 29
    haha, I love how they have road rage, pregnancy rage and plane rage.. xD
    I kind of enjoyed the "we're THAT indie" comment.. probably more than I should have :P
    haha. I kind of expected Keith to lay there also.. :P
    haha, omg. I swear I didn't read this before I sent you the "smooth as peanut butter" comment! THATS AMAZING though.. haha, xD
    I wish I could find a hairstyle that I can pull off, I always grow it really long, then cut it short.. I'm thinking of trying scene hair.. :/
    haha, that's wrong.. xD "lady parts.." xDD nice :P
    I like the ecofriendly idea though, that's cool. (:
    aah, that's awesome. I really like their acceptance speech. (:
    JERSEY SHORE! FIST PUMP! xD .. that was a jersey shore reference right? 'cause I got that one! :D:D:D
    Uhm, I think you've got it wrong, I do believe you are actually really talented at writing songs.. soo.. I don't know what you're talking about.. :/
    I like Jaws' performance outfit. That is epic.
    August 18th, 2010 at 08:34pm
  • it posted. all is okay. (:
    August 18th, 2010 at 08:16pm
  • WHAT?WHAATTT?!!
    OMG!
    I AM NOT REPOSTING THAT! THERE WAS A WHOLE COMMENT THERE! IN SIZE 1 FONT.. WHERE IS IT?! D<
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:27pm
  • oh, okay.. just double post.. whatever.. >_>
    Chapter 28
    uhm, woah, suggestive title... o_0
    hmmm. I do believe we went over this whole "Toronto" thing... :P
    It's spelled B.A.R.R.I.E and it's much less exciting, bustling and FAR less smoggy than Toronto.. come here instead! :D
    I'm glad Keith is finally feeling better... :|
    I LOVE FINLEY...
    SHOULD HAVE BEEN A GIRLthat's so dirty.. Dx :P
    I'm on chapter 29...duhnduhnduhnnn.. D:
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:26pm
  • Okay, I need to go clean the bathroom&vaccum the adjacent tv room, soo I shall be back laterrr!
    August 17th, 2010 at 06:37pm
  • Okay, I need to go clean the bathroom&vaccum the adjacent tv room, soo I shall be back laterrr!
    August 17th, 2010 at 06:37pm
  • Chapter 27 Continued
    I bet Airin does make a really good girl.. xD
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
    haha, Well, Marque is my other favorite [we all know mattymexican hair is my top] but if Marque is gonna be a Jaulby whore, then I want Airin.. :P
    I wish I got your futurama reference, but I don't watch the show soo...
    August 17th, 2010 at 06:36pm
  • Skinny jeans that aren't skinny......
    IS SHE PREGNANT. IS IT A GIRL?! D:
    ...
    oh..
    oh. no..
    I hope what I think is going to happen, doesn't happen..
    I don't know what I think is going to happen..
    I - ohthankgod, she's still alive. *phew*
    no guitar? ever again? no.nooononono.nooooo
    Omg, is the charity event based on real Shawna life? If so, that is awesome..
    the name of the event is awesome, that seriously needs to be real..just saying :P
    "Josline, I want you to make a woman out of me."
    ^ It is really hard to laugh quietly at 12:33 am.. unfortunately, that made me pretty much die laughing... xD
    Gober makes me think of the spongebob movie.. xD
    I have the perfect, not appropriate for the internet "busty" picture of me, at age like 12. I have two literal toilet paper rolls stuffed in my aunts gold bra.. it was quite a sight.. xD
    I'll finish this later..HAPPY BIRTHDAY
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:33am
  • Chapter 26
    eeeeegh. My thumb is itchy. ><
    I don't like the way Josline is acting, noott cool! D':
    D:
    Okay, I understand she's angry, but really?! REALLY?! O:
    Omg, she's not useless though! aaagh!
    ):
    I love Josh. <33
    comforting a girl, and convincing her she's beautiful are possibly the most difficult tasks in the world..I admit, I don't make it easy.. :/
    I'm glad she's trying to get better...I WANT her to be better.. :s
    awh, Finley+Mommy moment..
    finley should have been a girl..
    ;)
    August 17th, 2010 at 02:04am
  • Chapter 26
    TBA.because I have to switch over to my computer, and get off my dads..
    August 16th, 2010 at 08:54pm
  • YES! omg, I didn't think that posted, because "you must be logged in to acess this page"
    I nearly hit the roof, and almost shot right through.
    Everything's good though.
    *is relieved*
    August 16th, 2010 at 07:39pm
  • Chapter 25
    AGH. I'm so angry right now! >_< I would have posted the comment, as far as I had written, but no power = no wireless.
    Anyway, here goes comment 25 2.0
    Can you not drive all the way to Toronto, when there is a particularly awesome girl (if I do say so myself (; ) In Barrie, commmee take me you can't kidnap the willing! (;
    Marque's comment about his placement on planes reminded me of Josh IRL, and how he always seems to be seated near the crying babies. :P
    D8
    I'm at the point which Marque is requesting Airin's help, and Airin is worried. about Josline driving... D:
    eeeeeeeeeeeeh....
    Never again will I be able to peel carrots without becoming paranoid..
    I've atually got chills right now.. D:
    my thought's on Airins journey to the hospital? "ohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgod"
    For some reason, I really liked the fact that Airin didn't greet Josh with words, just a hug. I just felt like it was more appropriate.
    Airin is so brave, no offense, but I wouldn't be able to tough it, even a papercut makes me cringe. |:
    I was waiting for a Finley moment. :3
    woheohfhoahydoigfweydoeyf
    EEEEEEVVVVVIIIIILLLLL!!
    D<
    August 16th, 2010 at 07:33pm
  • Chapter 24
    I didn't finish this one.. so here goes..
    Just randomly started singing I'm not your boyfriend baby/love the way you lie.. odd...
    Aaah, They totally would be too.c:
    THAT'S SO DIRTY.
    But also extremely not cute, but not hot. Spicy? aha, Like cute and hot mixed.. xD
    Sorry, I got sidetracked..Back now!
    AHH. Sidetracked again.. stupid Kalan Porter.. >_<
    Anyway, I'm happy for Airin and Marque finally truly becoming Airique (;
    s'bout time we got some sexy sex. (;
    August 16th, 2010 at 03:58am
  • poopies.. my chapter thing didn't bold.. guess i'll have to do one more to make up for it (;
    Chapter 24
    I don't remember Josie, but I think Keith should hang out with her, and she helps him heal..
    *Wonders* is this the one where Airin goes brownish hair coloured? or is it crazy colours?...
    ..
    so he's going black?
    HAHA. omg, Finley's squeal reminded me of this little baby I saw today, he was in a stroller, and he was pretty young. He made a whiney face, like he was going to start crying, he made a cute gushy sound and then went back to sleep.. my mom said it must have been gas, typical male.. I was highly amused. xD
    I need to finish this when it's not two seventeen in the morning.. :/
    August 14th, 2010 at 08:17am
  • Chapter 23[/]
    nowplaying Alejendro (cover) - All Time Low :D:D:D
    I hope Keith goes, maybe it will give him some closure? :/
    Jazz.. D':
    I still think Finley should be a girl.. >_>
    Side note, I finally got a frame for my TMD poster! :D It was at this liquidation place, originally it was $50 I paid $15 plus tax..
    yeah.. back to the story!
    (can you tell i'm losing comment juice?) :/
    Keith is so strong.. I don't like how bad things happen to good people, but then again, I don't always like it when bad things happen to undeserving bad people either.. :/</3
    I totally cried again.. well, no, it's not really crying, it's just tearing up..majorly.. gosh, they're so amazing.. <333
    August 14th, 2010 at 03:21am
  • Chapter 22
    I am physically incapable of posting a proper comment on this chapter, it's sad, to start out. But at least things are moving forward..
    but then
    BAM
    MARRIAGE :DDDDDD
    AAWWWWHHHH.
    *gets I ♥ MARIN sign, as I have yet to make an "I ♥ AIRIQUE sign.. :/"
    I'm super happy for them.. I think one should wear a pink tie.. :3
    August 14th, 2010 at 03:13am