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Chapter 21
I'M NOT YOUR BOYFRIEND BABY! I AINT YOUR CUTE LITTLE SEX TOY!
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For some reason, this chapter made me cry, but the other one didn't..
I was just thinking about how the band is so close, and how they are always going to be there for each other..
And then Josh has to go and be this super cute daddy and awwwhh :3
I have totally read this chapter before! I remember the puree joke! o_0 gah, DON'T LIKE THIS!
The "deja-vu" I mean, the story is amazing. And the jokes are life <3
Airin's getting the joke a billion hours later reminds me of myself, the other day at like 3am I FINALLY got the "more chins that a Chinese phone book" joke/insult..xDD

Chapter 20
nowplaying:Loving You Tonight - Andrew Allen edit: It's now Acadia - Marianas Trench
dum-dadi-doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Dinners ready.. be back in a bit!
BACK!
okay, here goeees.
I think Keith needs a big non squishy, I'm here for you, i'll be your shoulder to cry on, no pats, but a nice gentle rub on the back hug...
If Olivia was a legit real person, who actually died, i'd feel like a nicbictch for hating on her so hard.. :/
when I first read “I'm going to go with Keith.” I read it as "i'm going to go down with Keith" Which then made me think of DWW... o_0
I want Keith to be happy again! MURDERER! ..was that too far?
i'm sorry.. :/

Chapter 20
TO BE ADDED!
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naturally it double posts againn.. /facepalm
Chapter 19
I'm going to try and make it to chapter 20's comment, but we'll see..:|
It's becoming harder and harder for me to picture Josh as this character, it's like, Josh, but a whole different Josh,, and then it's him..I know that doesn't make sense, it's nothing against your writing! It's more like, your writing is so amazing I have this whole new Josh yet the same one.. Like Josh 2.385
I totally caught the Hobo/Hobo-sexual reference.. :D your [real] brother is awesome..clone him for me? haha. maayybe not,, :P
I still was upset that Olivibitch died.. I hate her character, but still! Death is a horrible thing.. and in an explosion no less!
Oh, poor Keith.. :( <3

sorry for double post! :/
Chapter 18
Wooaah language! O:
Ooooh, aggressive Marque... *suggestive eyebrow movement..* :P
OMG! Haha, Keith's moment, reminded me of my drama exam, we had a fire drill the morning of it, while I was in the cafe listening to my ipod and reading over notes for other exams..I thought it was a joke so my friends and I casually left, but then a teacher came in and was like "THIS IS NOT A DRILL!" so I stuffed my things into my bag and left..Turns out, my ipod wasn't off and in the middle of drama, Lady Gaga's Love Game came on, and it was BLASTING the entire class was looking at me..it was embarrassing 'cause I jumped SO high.. xD
aaannnywayy...
I need to get my license.. :>| haha, I quite enjoy that fail face! xD It was supposed to be unimpressed, now it's just a guy with a big nose.. xD :>| > >:|
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>>>_<<< -that, m'dear is a mega-watt glare...'cause I know whats coming.. D': (;__;)

sorry for double post! :/
Chapter 18
Wooaah language! O:
Ooooh, aggressive Marque... *suggestive eyebrow movement..* :P
OMG! Haha, Keith's moment, reminded me of my drama exam, we had a fire drill the morning of it, while I was in the cafe listening to my ipod and reading over notes for other exams..I thought it was a joke so my friends and I casually left, but then a teacher came in and was like "THIS IS NOT A DRILL!" so I stuffed my things into my bag and left..Turns out, my ipod wasn't off and in the middle of drama, Lady Gaga's Love Game came on, and it was BLASTING the entire class was looking at me..it was embarrassing 'cause I jumped SO high.. xD
aaannnywayy...
I need to get my liscene.. :>| haha, I quite enjoy that fail face! xD It was supposed to be unimpressed, now it's just a guy with a big nose.. xD :>| > >:|
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>>>_<<< -that, m'dear is a mega-watt glare...'cause I know whats coming.. D': (;__;)

Chapter 17
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It needed to be shared. 'Cause he looks so childish and naive there.. not 26! (he was 26 at the time, 27 now)
I love Finley moments. And I totally understand Jaws' reluctance..
I love Matt, have I mentioned that? I'm not one for favorites.. (obviously ;P) BUT if I was, it would be him.. :D
ONLY THEY ARE NOT ALL GOING TO BE ALRIGHT! D: *sobs*
Kind of a filler, but nessecary.It shows how they've all kind of moved on and are accepting things now. <3

Chapter 17
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It needed to be shared. 'Cause he looks so childish and naive there.. not 26! (he was 26 at the time, 27 now)
I love Finley moments. And I totally understand Jaws' reluctance..
I love Matt, have I mentioned that? I'm not one for favorites.. (obviously ;P) BUT if I was, it would be him.. :D
ONLY THEY ARE NOT ALL GOING TO BE ALRIGHT! D: *sobs*
Kind of a filler, but nessecary.It shows how they've all kind of moved on and are accepting things now. <3

Chapter 16
I need to label/number my comments so that it's easier to remember where I left off.. *Mario voice* 'here we gooo'
I'm glad that Keith went to Mexico, he really needed to get away. It's pretty pathetic that I wish ED was a real band, it seems like their merch would be sick. And I know ED is based off real people, but to have a legitimate Airique in the world? would be amazing. :D
haha, "Do not get arrested"? nice touch :P
I know the chapters are all already posted, but I think it would be kind of cool if ED ran into TMD or TNC while in Montreal.. :D
I actually thought Can't Speak Dead was a real band for a few sentences there :$
Ironically I found out about Jacks Mannequin today! Can't believe I didn't know about them sooner! Planning on spending waay to much money at HMV soon.. :$

D: I should NOT have read the last comment.
Anyway.. off to read chapter 15, well, I've already read it, but I can't seem to find the words to express what I feel.. well, that was last night, so, I'll see how it goes this time around...
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I always feel bad for Keith, he seems the most down to earth and not innocent, but if anyone was deserving of such treatment (few-none are) I wouldn't peg him as being one. Maybe that's why it works so well in the story..
The fact that Keith is crying breaks my heart.. it's pretty sad. I only read this story and these characters are like a permanent fixture in my life <3
The Keith + Finley relationship seems like it will blossom nicely..
I want a cousin Finley.. is that weird? It probably is.. ohwell..but yea, a cousin, not a nephew. My parents would FLIP 'cause nick isn't fit to be a father and Nathan is too young!
well... that was a segue.. :\
Keith better go to mexico! HE BETTER!

I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!!
AHHHHHHHHH
I new Jazz would die at the end... you said you were crying when writing it... I KNEW IT! Dx
*goes to subscribe to next story*

Hey Olivia,
I DO NOT LIKE YOU! YOU NEED TO BACK THE EFF OFF AND CALM THE EFF DOWN YOU SCUMBAG TORRIN!
Shut. Up. Olivia! WE DON'T LIKE YOU!
What's he supposed to do? Fight back, hit a woman? HAH yeah right, Keith is sensible! UNLIKE YOU OLIVIBITCH!
Keith's former family situation is disgusting and awful, (not repulsive disgusting as in 'ew, I stepped in poo' more like 'how could anyone ever do that? It's horrible')
Olivia pisses me off SO HARD! >>>>>>_>>>>>>>
Jaulby cousinly love is cute.. <3

Once i'm all caught up, I'm going to take Josline's character picture and a picture of Josh (unless he has a profile on this story) and make a Finley on makemebabies.com >:D
I'm sorry, I don't really know what to write for chapter 13.. o_0
Josie sounds promising, I hope she makes further appearances..
Keith drama is boo-worthy and I cannot wait for it to end..
And, I guess that's it for that chapter...

Okay, seriously, it's probably getting annoying and very repetitive but I really do love Airique/Marin they [Airin]
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Hedley's 321 Just came on your mix, I JUST found the video for that song today! I was so happy I might've pee'd a little bit...
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Anyway...Airin is so supportive of his sister it makes me smile like a tool. :D
I remember what's going on with Keith now..
and I love him too. gah, i'm such a soppy love fest.
Flowers + Showing up on time or not, I still don't like Josh right now... >>_>> <-Less glary, but still pretty glary glare.
I <3 Matt the mostest though.. :$
Their not married, I don't like him having Josh's last name, and I still retain that it should have been a girl. NO I WILL NOT give that up!
I want one too, but like, for an hour or so, so that I can get a feel for it, and that's it.
Maybe i'll borrow my cousins, Macy Grace is a week old..yesterday? Maybe.. :/

Yes, I have indeed read further than chapter 10 previously.. but alas, I'm just going to keep going..
I still dislike Josh for deciding he's not ready to be a dad.
Uhm Jerkfacehole much?
>>>>>_>>>>>> <-very glary-glare
Stupid Josh.
GREAT timing Finley ;P

Ohai there neglected comment box!
(On my behalf at least)
I'm not sure where I stopped, but chapter 10 seems like unfamiliar territory, so alas, I shall start there...or here... whatever..
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They should make costumes that fit pregnant people.. jussayin'
and Boo. Alcohol is the root of so many problems. >_>
But cheers for Josline being legal! :D
waiiiittt... a minute.. am I missing something? I thought Finley was already born? o_0
haha, awe, Josh is cute <3
haha, ohh the boston pizza song. xDD
Haha, has it been stated that I <3 Airin yet? 'Cause I do. >:) (Don't worry, Marque, you're still my favorite)
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Keith, don't be stupid. Don't do anything stupid, and don't hurt yourself or the people who love you and vise versa...
Ah, well.. that's all for now. I need to go eat. More later!

No. Effing. Way.
I was all happy-go-lucky reading this. I was even super-excited about having a Newfie in the band (I have a surprising amount of Newfie friends lol). And then you had to go and do that.
Poor Marque, and Jaws, and ESPECIALLY Matt. Start that next story soon, woman! I'm dying! Poor choice of words, but you get it!!!

hahah 'Jersy Shore reference'
and I thought that Josline would kiss Josh or something on stage... what with them CONVIENENTLY presenting the award they won ;)
BUT WHAT HAPPENS IN THE LAST CHAPTER?! ITS JAZZ ISNT IT?! I KNEW IT!

Oh yay, they won an MMVA!!!
I liked that nothing really shocking happened in this update. It was nice to just have a bit of calm.
What's this? The link to the next story is up before this one is even finished? Excuse me while I check this out.
Also, I liked that you posted on Twitter how long it will be until this one is over lol.

I also liked the Marque-Josline moment there. I understand his reaction. I've been around a few new mothers lately, and they've told me everything I will ever need to know about breast feeding lol.
I usually don't like author's notes that talk about an upcoming ending, but yours made me happy. There's still more coming! Also, you put Webb in there. I miss Matt. He hasn't been in this story much.
I look forward to seeing how you end this!