H.B. and Gypsy - Comments

I feel soo bad for Landon and Ever! I hope they can make up or something.
UPDATE SOON!!!

Or Yellow Duckies will attack you o.0

Omg Landon! I feel so bad for them!

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almost cried :c

So sad for them both! D: Poor Landon ended up all traumatized and Ever feeling like the worst piece of shit. :/ And I imagine it'd feel even worse to know you're to blame and still have people treat you sweetly, thinking you're just really worried about your boyfriend. And then...Landon lied for him! I hope Ever can fix things little by little...and never drinks again.

Update??? D:

I can't even think of anything to say

Omg. I cried! You made me seriously cry! Like almost bawling. That was so sad. I don't even know what to say right now. I am speechless and I'm almost never speechless. The only thing I can think to say is that I seriously hope that Landon can forgive Ever, or at least get to a place where they can start working on their relationship again. I blame Ever's dad. If his dad worried about other things, like his baby on the way, then he wouldn't be as worried about Ever doing things that he doesn't like. And he's not even doing bad things. Just things his dad doesn't think is okay. God, grrrr, I could sit here all day and write you a freaking novel for a comment. But I won't. I just hope and wish that they can work things out. And Ever's dad can pull the stick out of his ass.

P.S. I was surprised that Landon's mom didn't wake up to Landon screaming and yelling or even Ever yelling. Cause I have the feeling she might be able to help Ever and Landon work through all this. I love the story love the update. And I can't wait for another one. Just don't make me cry again.

I am so sad right now. Ditto AsThe FinalNoteDies. That is all.

I was on the edge of my seat the entire chapter. Oh Gods, I really hope they can turn things around after that happened. If they can come out of this together then they are stronger than I. I don't think I'd be able to ever trust Ever again if I were in Landon's position, and I know that if I were Ever I wouldn't be able to live with myself after doing something like that. I really hope they do prove stronger than I. Hope to be reading more soon! <3

Okay I'm commenting again because like, this was huge! Okay!
And I'm just, I spent my day with thoughts going back to what happened between Landon and Ever and you must update soon!

Well... you don't have to of course, but please! This suspense is killing me D:

This chapter was written really well. I felt like I was there
:o

oh my god! I was dreading reading this chapter because I knew something bad was going to happen. I just don't even know what to say to this! I was almost in tears! You need to update soon please please please!

Oh my. I'd said i was glad that Ever went to Landon's house, cause I thought he'd ask for help. Now I think I wish he hadn't gone at all. :/ It's complicated because he's only drank a couple of times, so technically he should be able to stop. But the problem is the reason why he did it and the fact that alcohol helped him deal with it. So as far as the problem exists, it'll be hard for Ever to resist. If things hadn't been so fucked up this time, he could have a real, good talk with Landon about what happens with his dad, ask for help. I don't know like...if his mom can't help maybe even tell Landon's mom. But after this things are harder. Even if Landon surely knows it was the alcohol making Ever act that way, he's still terrified and will find it very hard to trust him again. :/ So sad.

Oh my god I'm so heartbroken right now. I really really really really need another update soon and I can't stand the thought of it not being fixed!

Holy shit. I can't... I can't even.. Holy shit.

Noooo! Noooo!
D:
Oh god noooo! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Landon<3 I cried a bit there, noooo Landon. Fuckign Ever man D: Every whyyy? Damn it.

Okay so I'm angry but I understand why this has all happened and I just hope that Ever can fix this. I hope he tells his mom about EVERYTHING his dad did and that he tries to fix things with Landon again.

Oh gods, Ever! I knew something with his dad was going to happen soon. I just wish it hadn't. It always seems to work out that way with everything happening at once to overwhelm you. I just hope E and Landon can get through this latest trial without too much trouble. I just love these two so much that it would kill me to see them lose all that they've worked so hard for and what happiness they've gained together and so completely deserve. I hope you're enjoying Chicago, and I can't wait to be reading more! <3

Omg. Wtf Ever?! Landon's already being weird now he's going to be pissed!
More soon please!

THIS STORY IS BACK I'M SO EXCITED