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  • PenguinATTACK

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    Hope you update soon (:
    November 29th, 2010 at 12:05pm
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    ahhhh a kiss!
    October 23rd, 2010 at 04:02am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    Okay, so this story is so freakin' adorable! I only have time to read the few first chapters, but you guys definitely have a new subbie here (: I was captivated the second I read the first few words; it's so cute! Even though he was a jerk when he was young, Storm is such a cutie :D I'm really excited to see what happens next.
    I'm subbing :D <3
    October 23rd, 2010 at 03:13am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    OOO they're alone
    October 21st, 2010 at 05:51am
  • oathkeeper.

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    This is fantastic.

    I don't know what else there is to say, that hasn't already been said.

    Only, you've got yourself another subscriber.
    October 21st, 2010 at 04:35am
  • Lunar

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    The layout is beautiful. Like, seriously. It wasn’t even plugged in. They're probably planning on shipping it off soon.

    What the hell. I’m a growing boy, I need to eat!
    --this part made me chuckle. I really thought that first chapter was a good start. This isn't something I'd read, but I still liked it. Nicely done <3
    October 10th, 2010 at 02:52am
  • Patty Lovell

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    This is good. It's original, and I love the banner.

    The summary broke my heart.

    In the story itself, there are spelling mistakes, which you could fix easily I'm sure if you looked. But it does kind of bug me.

    but my dad toke a new job and he’s been talking about it all week
    You mean "took" I'm sure. ^_^
    You need to put commas after some things, too. Look out for that.

    Other than that, you're doing really great! ^_^
    October 10th, 2010 at 12:13am
  • HisPoohObessedGirl

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    MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
    July 8th, 2010 at 06:52am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    umm they are tending to get awkward around each other, wondering how long it will take for them to catch their own drift...
    July 2nd, 2010 at 04:16am
  • Isabella Sykes .

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    Thanks for all the comments! And I apologize that we don't update often. Vivian and I have been busy lately.
    June 21st, 2010 at 05:50am
  • Bil4Myth

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    I like it plz update
    June 21st, 2010 at 01:33am
  • HisPoohObessedGirl

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    I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! and "He's Bad"
    I read it on Polyvore, :)
    then i found out you were cancelling so i got an account, lol :)
    May 20th, 2010 at 04:57am
  • UpAndUp

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    i love this! moree please!
    May 8th, 2010 at 01:15am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Storm just admit that you want her in all ways! and Camile (sp?) too!
    May 6th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • UpAndUp

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    I loved the last chapter! What was the dare?! Please write more soon please!
    April 12th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • OMG TOAST!

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    Awwwwe... I love how they despite each other... uh, the love, the love...
    The story's great.. so as your writing! haha, most of the story I was laughing my ass off Ha, here's for you! Get that! Muhahaa, someone's in tro-uble.. yeah..
    Well, when Camilla will fight back? I can't wait to see what she has in plan for him... x [watch out, Storm!]

    Please say she has a beautiful voice anf he's gonna hear her sing, ugh! please! please!

    Haha, keep it up!~
    April 11th, 2010 at 08:09pm
  • BabyHazelEyes

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    Subscribing.
    Update(:
    April 11th, 2010 at 07:14pm
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Storm is a laugh, and its a good story xD
    April 11th, 2010 at 07:10pm
  • blaqrican13

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    cant wait 4 more
    April 3rd, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • Autumnazing

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    *There

    Sorry. :D
    April 2nd, 2010 at 07:46pm