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  • Nia_Flores

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    I can't believe it took me almost a year to read this story & I loved every bit of it! It was awesome & heartfelt! You're writing is mesmerizing!!! & Annie stole my heart! I actually felt like she was real! The characters were so well written & so heartfelt! Just amazing!!!
    September 12th, 2011 at 06:18pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    43: LOVED everything about this story. Hated Donny probably just as much az every reader that left comments. Sad to see it end cause those descriptions were surpassing all other Avenged father stories that I've read. I will go check out that new story right now. Got a last question though; ever thought of giving this a sequel? Cause I am guessing that all the readers were wondering that as well. Looks like it is official though; you've got my longest comment for the new year so bye. Oh, by the way; loved how long the last two chapters were.
    January 1st, 2011 at 10:23am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    Sound interesting. Has excellent descriptions and a great plot. Wondering why the rest are worried for Brian? Can not to read the next chapter and hopefully find the answers.
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:42am
  • lovespell;

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    Omg, that ending was so unbelievably sweet! Everyone ended up so happy, and I was happy to see that. There is so gonna be TONS of babies in that group soon! Wow, it seems like everyone is getting married and pregnant. LOL. It sad to see the story go, but you did great with it. And to think you were nervous about posting it. I think you should listen to me more often ;)

    Great story to a great stoy! :D
    December 24th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    I loved this story alot and I'm so happy with the ending but sad to see it end....u know :) awesome story hun can't wait to check out more :P
    December 21st, 2010 at 08:55am
  • Mercades Benzedrien

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    Please Please Please make a sequal!!! I would love to see Annie as a teen dealing with the trama and Brian dealing with teenage boys!!
    December 20th, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    That was such a perfect ending! I loved how everyone's lives turned out although it makes me want a sequel! Anyways, amazing, I loved it! <3
    December 20th, 2010 at 07:48am
  • danimals owns

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    It's bittersweet. I loved this story and it's over, but the ending was great. Thanks so much for writing it, it was fantastic, one of my favorites. Now I'm ready and waiting for your new one.
    December 20th, 2010 at 07:25am
  • JimmySullivan

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    BRAVOOOOOOO! :D loved it!
    December 20th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • xPoppinxChampagnex

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    I absolutely love this story.
    I could read it over and over, and I plan on it too.
    I also plan to read your new story too.
    I can't wait.
    December 20th, 2010 at 06:10am
  • Issues

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    I wanna cry!
    I loved the christmas party stuff and I love how Jimmy made up to leana! It was so sweet.
    I also love the joke Johnny made. :3
    The ending was the awesomest ending ever.
    Now I'm gonna go sunscribe to your new story.
    December 20th, 2010 at 05:15am
  • mistery gurl

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    holey moley!! i didnt realize how long the chapter was until you said it was fifteen pages long!!
    i loved the chapter, and even though its the last, i ts my fave!!
    im sad to see it end though
    December 20th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • is-it-such-a-syn

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    I cant believe its actually over. This was just amazing, from beginning to end. Words cant really describe how incredible it was. You did an excellent job writing it and I'm happy to say that i wish i could write like you do (:
    You have a wonderful writing talent my friend, don't forget that.
    I love love love love love love love the way the story ended!! xD Finally a happy ending to all the bullshit, pain && heartbreak everyone had to go through in this story!! I sooo happy everything worked out for Brian in the end, and for Annie also (:
    He has his daughter, his new wife, and two more kids on the way,
    and Annie has a loving family, and memories to last a life time (:
    Normally id be begging for a sequel, but i like the way this ended and i honestly can say that i don't want to see a sequel......
    in less maybe its just like another epilogue or something that's placed like 5 maybe 10 years in the future. (; haha just saying LOL

    Anywaaaays, ^.^
    Fantastic, simply incredible.
    I'm happy i waited however long i waited for this update cause i truly was not disappointed in the outcome (:
    Thank you for writing this love, i really appreciate it. (:
    December 20th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • MamaZ

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    as much as i'm sad to see that this story is over, it was a fun ride. it couldn't have ended any better, some many babies and love...just a great way to end. I loved this story and i just want to say thanks for taking time out of your life to write it
    December 20th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • JB.is.luv

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    I gotta say, this has been your most successful story to date and for a good reason too. You seemed to capture all these characters so well and with your crazing OCD organizing (which I'm not criticizing since we have that in common) you managed to keep track of all of them. Even though it was mushy and everyone is popping out babies (guess the Jonas' aren't the only ones :P) it was still an adorable way to end such an amazing story. After everything all the characters went through in this story (especially Brian) its good to see everything turn out okay for them. I'll definitely be reading your latest story :) Loved it sis!

    PS sorry this comment isn't longer but I'm too beat right not to delve into all the little details of the chapter that I enjoyed (like Annie and Michelle buying McKenna a Victoria's Secret gift card, lol).
    December 20th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • lovespell;

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    Great final chapter!

    I was so glad to see so much wrapped here. So happy that Val has been clear of the charges. That's a relief. I felt bad for Lacey thinking she wasn't good enough to fit in with the rest, but I was happy with the scene where she and Johnny got engaged. That was very sweet. And as usual, Brian, Michelle, and Annie are SO cute. I love their little family, and I'm glad to finally see them all happy together :D

    I can't believe this story only has an epilogue left! It doesn't seem like you've been writing this all that long. I look forward to seeing how everything ends for everyone. Update soon!
    December 9th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Aw I'm so glad Lacey is okay and her and Johnny are engaged now!
    Loving the family moments with Brian, Michelle, and Annie!
    Looking forward to the epilogue! <3
    December 7th, 2010 at 07:43am
  • JB.is.luv

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    Wow, one more story down...you're knocking these down fast sis, soon there won't be anything left for me to procrastinate with!

    I liked the chapter overall (you know me...I'm a sucker for happy endings). Good to see Annie and Brian are okay again...being open with each other is key because they're still getting to know each other and getting used to the whole father-daughter thing. The scene at the hospital was touching with all of them being together and partaking in the usual banter. I'm SO HAPPY Val and Lacey are in the clear with both their situations. Johnny lashing out was rather unexpected but understandable...I think any of the guys would have acted the same. That was sad Lacey thought all those things about herself...she was my favorite and seems like the sweetest of the girls...that's why I would have been uber sad if you killed her off (did I mention how happy I was that you didn't?) The proposal was kind of expected. Before Jimmy and Leana even walked in i was like, wow, that would be a perfect time for Johnny to propose...you and I babe, on those freaking mind waves...haha. And of course the family moment was totally adorable. A change in Brian can definitely be seen. And thank goodness for that.

    Can't wait for the epilogue! (Not gonna lie, I'm kinda excited this is over cuz that means you'll have more time for GID :D)
    December 6th, 2010 at 08:28pm
  • mistery gurl

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    wow, that was a great chapter!!
    i loved the way it ended!
    December 5th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • Issues

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    I love this story, I wanna cry since this was the last chapter. :(
    But I have to say the ending part where Brian Annie and Michelle were outside at the beach made me smile and I love the part with Johnny in it.
    I can't wait for the epilogue and your Zacky story.
    December 5th, 2010 at 10:07pm