Scream Harder. - Comments

Ah, it didn't suck. There have to be at least a few filler chapters. Can't be all action, can it? ;) Oh, and I hope she and Sean stay close! He seems like he'd be a decent friend for her :)

not bad
im curious to where this will go
hmmmm
*subcribes*

I love it!!! :) Keep It I want to see how it turns out :)

Omg I freakin loveeee it!!!!!! Check myne out too homie!!!

Keep the story i really wanna see how it turns out

Amazing! You done it yet again! lol love ya!

Hey :) Thank god for email notification eh? I'm sorry I haven't gotten back to you sooner, but it looks like you've got everything under control! I didn't catch that Papa Gates was adopting her when you messaged me, but I think that's so cool :)

Her age is perfectly fine the way it is. And aside from a few spelling/grammar errors, this story is off to a great start! Najel seems like a pretty believable character so far, and I can't wait to see what you do with her! Also, I thought the description was good too.

Keep it up, and if you have anymore questions, please do not hesitate to message me!