LOLOL well i read this part and i just Knew it was wrong but it was still funny!
"She laughed again and got closer to him. She placed her leg over his, and she grinded her body against his, like a CAR!!"
You might wanna fix that :) but all in all it was a Wonderful story and i loved every chapter and all the twists and turns that came with it :} Great Job. i look forward to reading more of your stories :)
So there we two chapters posted and i was hoping that you made a mistake with the same chapter name and there was two chapter but I am happy nonetheless that you posted the one chapter. Glad to see her with brian he loves her and treats her better and while her and matt click they are not as great together to me... hope you update again soon...