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  • strlitesm

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    Holy shit! Does Brian know? It's totally going to break his heart. Jade is a dirty skank for sleeping with the both of them the same night. She totally doesn't deserve Brian. I think Matt and Jade deserve each other, but now I don't think I'll be too happy for them if they end up together.
    May 4th, 2010 at 04:17am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    HOLY SHIT!
    May 4th, 2010 at 01:48am
  • PinkRabbit

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    oh no!! i feel so bad for brian, i was hoping that they would stay together :(
    May 3rd, 2010 at 08:33pm
  • Airheart.101

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    *sad face* Oh dear god... Poor poor Brian.
    May 3rd, 2010 at 03:15pm
  • trishahhh

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    that was UH-MAZING chapter!!!! damn, i even almost felt her orgasm too!!!! what a chapter!!! please update soon!!! you have made my sunday!!!!
    May 3rd, 2010 at 10:35am
  • RetroGlamo

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    Something tells me she will become pregnant :O they didn't use a condom! Either way, finally they did it. I'm proud :)
    May 3rd, 2010 at 10:03am
  • SynnerSaynt

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    About damn time they did it!
    That's not gonna push them apart- them fucking eachother just made their bond stronger.
    Not that I'm complaining! lol
    May 3rd, 2010 at 07:22am
  • Tasha_16

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    damn woman... dont leave us hanging!!! update!! :):):)
    please dont hurt brian.. i'm watching you... lol
    April 29th, 2010 at 08:16am
  • Kaoru.

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    Uh oh...Brian caught them! Cheese

    Great updates (cuz I had to read more than one cuz I got behind >.<)! Keep up the good work!
    April 27th, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • RetroGlamo

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    I usually don't comment on stories because, I'm just too cool. (Ha!)

    This story has got to be amazing. I just love it and the characters, you two have made an amazing story and I would love for you to update soon. I just hope Brian doesn't get hurt, please don't let him get hurt or else I will hate Jade :O
    Oh and I think it was the 6th chapter, I found it hilarious when Jade thought Brian's house was 'big' then one of you writers was like '(thats what she said)' HA! HA! :] ..nice going.

    Retro.
    April 27th, 2010 at 02:04pm
  • yanni321

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    oh shit shit shit! ahh! i still dont want brian to get hurt! :S
    April 27th, 2010 at 02:28am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    OMG they are terrribleeeeeeeee gunna get caught lol.
    April 26th, 2010 at 08:38pm
  • gummibears

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    uhh-ohh lol
    April 26th, 2010 at 07:11pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    :O( not good
    April 26th, 2010 at 03:44pm
  • BC13

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    You made me laugh so hard when that thing came up like what was it again...oh yeah 'how does that fit in anybody' i was literally like OMG ahaahhahaha xd
    and the end, I saw it coming but still o.O
    April 26th, 2010 at 01:34pm
  • Airheart.101

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    *sniff* I feel sad already... Poor Brian. Poor Jade. Poor Matt. Poor Val... Agh... this is messed up.
    April 26th, 2010 at 12:09pm
  • trishahhh

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    im at the edge of my seat!!!! update already i cant believe the cliff hanger!!!!
    April 26th, 2010 at 09:11am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    Awesome chap!
    I wish they would stop playing around and just get together already! Guh!!!
    But i love it all the same, the rise of anticipation is swelling!
    -Emm
    April 26th, 2010 at 01:20am
  • Airheart.101

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    Interesting... I liked the flash-back moment:]
    April 25th, 2010 at 05:12am
  • Tazmundi

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    I liked this chapter too. :)

    Awesome work

    <3
    April 20th, 2010 at 09:57am
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