Burning Desires - Comments

Poor girl

oh boy lol

I wanna drop-kick Matt in the face! lol
Why did he show up at Brian's house if he was so sure on proposing to Val?

OMFG O.o Matt is such an asshole O.o and ahahaha, Brian is so funny and cute in this story xd ;D

Now stay in bed (THATS WHAT SHE SAID) and write for 20 more minutes;D
I really liked this chapter. "YOU'RE THE STRIPPER WHO SAVED MY SEX LIFE."xD EPIC FAIL!

Ohhh this is so EXCITING! Oh boy my blood is pumping, I can't wait. XD

I STILL can't wait for the next chapter. Even more so now that Jade & Val are finally going to meetXD

^^ I don't think it's wrong at all... I don't know what it's like in other countries but in Aus we actually have pole dancing competitions and people do classes at the gym and everything. :) I'm considering going for a lesson lol.

New reader! I love that she's making Matt jealous although I'm growing a little too fond of Brian. I can't wait to see if Val or Michelle notices Jade in Brians car after the lesson lol I love drama.

by helping, I'm guessing she'll be giving HIM a lap danceXD
Awesome chapter, and is it wrong for me to think that learning how to pole-dance like that may be fun?:)

ooooh jade teaching matts girl how to dance

I wonder how this will affect her plan...

Matty is jealous

hahahaha.<3
good one (:

Oohhh! Matt wants his cake to eat it too!
Doesn't work that way, Mattie-Boy, lol.

hehe, well done at setting the jealous thing-ma-bob, mood, that's the word! enjoyed it lots, i am looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Brian is... GOOD. At making matt jealousXD Wonder if hes gonna have a girl by the end of this though^^

The last part like 'Brian Don't you dare-' sounds like 2something his mother would say dunno ghah :'D I'm madly in love with this story ;D

Haha, Matt seems really pissed. =))

I likes where this is going :)

*suscribe*

<3

Well.....i think he's a bit pissed off haha good he needs it to open his fuckin eyes lol

Frickin' badass update!