The Fake Bride - Comments

Loved it, really heating up now :D hope you update soon :D x

Great update!!

So professionally written/typed >.< And please do get on your ass and start cranking out the updates xD But if I must wait a couple of months, then I shall :D

Oh my goodness, you need to update now! Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah!! There, is that enough for you? Haha. Anyway, I am loving the eighth chapter even though it is sad. But I am hoping that things will begin to look up for everyone... hopefully. :)

yaay! You updated!

I love your story :D I've been waiting for you to update for ages :D i hope you do again soon :D i want to know if my guess on how it progresses is correct :P
Don't stop with the great writing :)
x

Nyeh!! MORE PLEASE!!!

i'm glad you updated.
it was really good.
i hope you'll update sooner
please and thank you

I love the layout. It's very pretty and it fits the mood of the story well.
I've only read the first chapter so far, so I haven't gotten a good idea of the plot yet, but I love the characters and their friendship. It seems so realistic. I'm definitely coming back to read more when I get the chance!

I really like the layout, though, the font used for the chapter titles really hurts my eyes and is really hard to read for me. But it's okay, their click-able and everything becomes okay later. But it still hurts.

Chapter One:
I love the font.

The day seems so nice, I feel like something is going to go wrong, soon. I kinda like how you started this out, it's very basic, giving a small feeling to the tone of writing and what's to be expected in detail. I like it, a lot. You're not cramming a bunch of details into one paragraph, which makes me a very happy camper.

So, I wonder how much alike the servant and the princess look like, since they apparently change places and we do not get a happy ending to this story -- which I wonder why not, an that makes me very pleasantly confused.

I like the character interaction between the servant and the princess, it seems to flow quite nicely and they seem like really good friends. I really like it. Good job on their interaction and personalities.

Chapter Two.
I like how you make it limited third person, and Trinity being the main character rather than the princess. I don't care much for princesses and I love the detail you put into what everyone is doing and the small notes and gestures that go on.

Lorena is mean and needs to be backhanded, really hard by an augmented security guard. Though, her character reminds me of Gertrud from The Gargoyle, who I wasn't fond of, but I liked the way she was written. I would like it if Lorena was elaborated, as to why she's so mean and why she does the things she does, and why she says the things she does, I mean, I don't want her being a cardboard enemy to Trinity.

Need some depth with that attitude.

The princess is really kind to her, that's really nice. She seems like a genuine friend. Though, I am still not liking how the princess sounded in the summary, so I am still weary of her... and I think I will be throughout all the chapters.

Oh my, it seems the princess and Trinity both have a crush on that fellow, or well, they both seem to like him a lot. I wonder if there will be any drama because of that? Or conflict...

Chapter Three.
Oh, so the princess and the fellow are betrothed, I am definitely wondering if any drama will ensue with their connections, or what happens. The princess seems to be happy with him, so I wonder what's going to happen...

I would comment so much more, and I think I will when my eyes stop hurting. I love the story and I am going to subscribe, so I will comment more later and along with the updates that follow. As bad a I am with subscriptions. So, good luck and happy writings! (:

I love your story concept and it was beautifully written, although not the type I would read I found myself liking it and it was very unique and elegant.
I love the layout it's well done.
I only read the first two chapters so I will keep reading and subscribing. :)

The Princess is such a brave person. It is just unbelievable. Oh my goodness, I cannot believe Trinity said that to Lorena. But at least she stood up for herself. Because we know that doesn't happen very often.

And I didn't think the chapter was boring at all. It was nice to look into the lives of the other maids, especially Wren. I really like her and it is sad that Trinity is leaving her behind. But this is still one of my favorite stories on here. I just love it so much!

I love this story! I can't wait for more updates. (:

Lovely is a lovely word xD and I read fast ;3 And I like this Wren character... very straight-forward :D Update D; but don't rush it :D

Its so original and I love how descriptive it is. Please, update as soon as you can!

I like the update!
And I don't think anybody is mad at you for not updating!
Everyone gets busy. :-)

I like the update!
And I don't think anybody is mad at you for not updating!
Everyone gets busy. :-)

I am so happy that the two made up! They are such good friends. And I really like how the two thought the four-leaf clover wasn't real. That part made me chuckle. I feel that something is going exciting is going to happen in the next chapter - maybe.

Dear Cerbera, while reading your end note I couldn't help but chuckle since I could hear a clear voice in my head saying the "first I do that, then I..." it was, refreshing. I must confess that your writing is yet one of my favorites because you put special attention in little details and I just couldn't imagine you writing in such way. Do not take long and write another chapter. I'm very curious to see what happens between the princess and the earl that makes Trinity decide to take her place and even more curious to see in what clever way she does it (or if there is any magic involved).
Keep writing.

I loved it! Can't wait for the next one :)