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  • rebellious angel

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    awesome!!!!
    please write more!!
    March 18th, 2010 at 01:05pm
  • midnighter13

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    Thank you for updating!!!!! Especially w/ an Owl City song. . . it must have been torture!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!
    March 14th, 2010 at 02:55am
  • Airheart.101

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    heeheeXD Zack.... tsktsk. How horny can angels be...?:)
    Oh shit... They don't know about jared do they... fuckfuckfuck. The danger isn't only at school. They really should know better:P
    Hi5! agh. Their songs are so repetative and over-played. I think its 'fireflies' stuck in your head. I don't get why people like them so much...
    March 13th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • Phil Marlowe

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    Aww! They're all becoming friends! Yaah.
    Lmao! Congrats on pulling off a stellar chapter with an Owl City induced head ache! (for me, the guy is just, like, too much sugar. Not my cup of tea either =]).
    March 12th, 2010 at 11:23pm
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    heeheeXD He thought that Zach was trying to make a move... EPIC! Angels rock;)
    Don't suffocate under the dry, crusty paper k? I LIKE this story! oh. And you too of course:)
    March 11th, 2010 at 03:05pm
  • midnighter13

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    I love the new chapter!!!! thx for updating!!
    March 10th, 2010 at 10:33pm
  • Phil Marlowe

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    Yah! AWESOME chapter! K, cuz, like, first of all, Zach comforted Aled in the washroom like how Lou had comforted Zach in the first story and the symmetry was awwwesome! (see? I pay attention hehe)
    AND omg lol!! "Whoa, hey, now, dude I don't swing that way," lol or however you put it. Hehe!
    And, the piece de resistance, Aled has come around and a) believes Z + E are angels and b) is being more receptive of them wanting to be his friends! Hurray!
    ... did I just sum up your story back to you? Yeah I did. Lol, sorry. But I really liked it, see, so I just had to talk about all the parts... anyway =D.
    March 10th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • rebellious angel

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    ahh!!! i love it!!!!
    this is the best story ever!!!!!!!!
    my fav. part in this ch. is when aled and zach with the whole wing things!!
    March 10th, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • Blaketh

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    and you laughed at me when i sed i would stroke an angels wings if i met one and then u write it in a story :)
    March 10th, 2010 at 06:38pm
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    i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    omg i love it!
    haha the whole swing part.
    March 9th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • Phil Marlowe

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    Hey!!! How's it going, man??
    Ok, so, loved the chapter! Lol! I totally thought Aled was going to be like "...are you on drugs??" and I was all set to laugh about that. But, hehe, him still thinking she was crazy was goood!
    Really? Swings make you (and Erica) sick? Dude, that sucks. Swings are the best.
    Anyway, I hope you can update soooon!! Talk to ya later!
    March 9th, 2010 at 02:12am
  • midnighter13

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    Awwwwww!! i really like it!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update if you have the time!!!
    March 8th, 2010 at 12:29am
  • Airheart.101

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    BEAT JARED UP ZACH, ERICA & LOU!!! RUN ALED, RUN! YOU CAN'T CATCH HIM, HE'S THE GINGERBREAD-MAN! jkjk
    Well... If someone told me that THEY were my guardian angel I would have almost the same reaction... Not really.. I just wouldn't believe them, laugh and then walk off.
    And if they actually PROVED that they protected me, then it would become more... complicated and interesting:)
    March 7th, 2010 at 07:01am
  • andy'sxbatgrlx4ever

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    i love it! poor erica, tells aled the truth and he calls her crazy..
    March 7th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • rebellious angel

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    omg i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    your such a talented writer!
    omg can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
    i think the whole zach and erica thing is so adorable!!!
    plz update as soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!!!1
    no pressure.hehe
    March 5th, 2010 at 11:23pm
  • Phil Marlowe

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    Aww! I wonder what he has written in his journal. I wonder if he draws pictures in there. Does he have real deep, introspective thoughts? Does he write "Dear Journal" at the start of every entry? hehe!
    What was Erica remembering?? I was like "oh! here's a test of how close I pay attention to these stories, ok, so how is this situation similar to one in the past..." and I couldn't think of it! Ugh, embarrassing lol.
    Goood update! Character advancing, I like it!
    PS, it's fun writing from the opposite sex perspective eh?
    March 4th, 2010 at 05:20am
  • Airheart.101

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    If Jared even lays a finger on Aled, I will kick his ass so hard that it will touch the back of his neck. Period.
    March 3rd, 2010 at 05:19pm
  • Phil Marlowe

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    Whoa! Miss Smith is bi-otch! Great character, major hard ass lol.
    Aww Erica is so sweet! She's trying to get back into the swing of high school (poor girl, having to relive that sh*t even for a temporary time), but she's always nice and kind! Ah, I love her.
    And Aled is being a total stick in the mud. But, like, understandably a stick in the mud you know? Something about his brutal negativity is so entertaining to read hehe!
    Good update!! Post more, por favor, when you get the chance!
    February 28th, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • Airheart.101

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    Aled's reactions are true to his character:) but still. That was a definate Ouch. YAAAY! A cynical character! Like me!xD not really... I CAN be cynical, but he goes far beyond.
    February 28th, 2010 at 03:38pm
  • Airheart.101

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    wow... Lou..? serious? Two images I am having serious trouble connecting with each other...XD great update by the way!
    February 27th, 2010 at 01:19pm