Guardian Angels. - Comments

i love lou! ha ha..its really good hayley! i too was imagining erica punching zach..that would be hilarious! cant wait for the next update

Omg! I burst out laughing, picturing Erica deck Zach. I know she didn't, but like the image of her potentially doing it was so funny!! Wow that is awesome. Our leading ladies kick ass, man!
Awesome chapter. I like it, muy mucho!!
Oh btw, the whole 'future is like the past' thing- as I reader I completely 100% accept it. Like, yeah it doesn't really make sense lol, but it doesn't matter. Your writing is AWEsome and, I think, us fans want to read about Erica being a guardian angel in, like, a here-and-now time. So, uh, it's totally coool!! =].

Don't worry:) I like Aled too! He knows who he is in the social side of school and for the most part, doesn't give a shit about it. I like him alot! His brother, Jared, on the other hand is an asshole (note to him if he [him & he both being Aled] ever finds out: I think hair without a strand outta place is fucked up & fake, bed-head hair is sexierrr... rawrr;D)

Awww!! I like Aled! He's a sarcastic loner and that type appeal to me hehe!
And hey! Jared! Be nicer to your brother! You only have one, you douche puppy!
*claps hand over mouth in horror because of actually thinking the phrase 'douche puppy' outside of own ficitional story*... I'm too involved with my story and your story. The lines of reality are getting blurred...
Anyway, awesome chapter! update soon!

I LOVE the new chapter!!!!! its so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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I pwotect hwim fwom the angwy teenagas too! xD Epic win^^

Lol, when I saw the title of this chapter I immediately thought of "The Boys are Back In Town" by Thin Lizzy. I don't really know why, I've never listened to that song of my own free will. But now that I'm listening to it, it's pretty goood. "The Boys are Back in Town" by: Thin Lizzy
- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ham6vFy8v2I-
Anyway, lol! Ok, so, I pay a freakish amount of attention to your story and when Zach first came to Earth in I Am Fallen... wasn't he totally naked? Are he and Erica just, like, roaming around naked now? LOL! Omg I am so dirty minded- I'm so sorry.
Anyway! Moving on past that. Oh! Erica and Zach are so cute, hugging and teasing each other! Ahh! I can't wait to read more of their cuteness! (And I can't wait to meet Aled).

ha ha.....love it! poor erica has to wear a skirt!

This will be veryveryveryvery interesting:D

oh my freaking gosh! i love this! u rock hayley!

yay for sequels!!! looks great. =]

OMG! I love it. So aWEsome. And it was nice and long too!
Ok, first of all, I was like 'awww!' right out loud when Zach was like 'my' Erica. I was like AW! He loves her so much and the proctectiveness is actually sweet and not annoying (*cough*edwardcullenlayoff*cough*).
And, ok, I'm soo curious about this Aled kid. First, why is his name Aled and not Alex? (lol, I've never heard of Aled before). Second, what's his deal?? Why is Erica suited to be his guardian angel?
I'm sooo curious, it's retarded hehe. Update soooon!

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!
I like that he's so protective over her.
I'd marry any guy who jumps infront of an archangel for me.
I'm a true romantic.
MORE?
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Yay! I was so exited when I heard you were writing a sequel. And after I read it I know it's going to be just as brilliant as the first. I can't wait to read more. (:

YAY! i like it :]