Passing Looks and Disappointed Faces - Comments

Okay, I'm on chapter 7 right now and usually I wait until I finish reading the story before commenting but DAMN I just found something so hilarious I HAD to comment because its been 10 minutes and I keep giggling about it.
MEESE! A FLOCK OF RABID MEESE!
Oh my GOD that is fookin HILARIOUS.
Oh God.
MEESE! MEEEESE!

was that event in gerard's room, was it the person that frank hurt? for some reason his name escapes me at the moment...but was it him?! does he by chance, in a twisted way, love frank and doesn't want anything to happen to him? knowing that gerard, despite the load, could actually handle it?

wow, seriously, you have an amazing knack for writing and you do it so well. the wait, no matter how long, is always worth it. i know i say that all the time but it doesn't mean the meaning and sincerety behind it deminishes...i mean it each and every time i say it! =]

wow, fantastic updates!

I loved that chapter, it really tugged on my heart... poor frankie....
But who the hell was it who spoke to Gerard and hit him in his room? I mean, I'm guesssing it was a good person...

more soon!

xoxox

I'm finally back...not sure if you all noticed. I'm quite glad to be back, writing this story again; I've come to miss it. I really do apologize for letting the rest of my life get the best of me and impede me from doing what I love; it was uncalled for. But I'm back and plan to stay here for quite some time, at least until I can finish the story. The end is in sight for me finally, dears. [Honestly, I never had any idea on when I would finish the story; now I do.]

Oh, and sorry for the shameless whoring but please comment? It makes me feel a hell of a lot better and keeps me going.

<3 Jenn

i hope everything gets better take whatever you need ive been in a simliar situation

i'm sorry things are so hectic and hell-ish for you right now.

real life takes priority, hands down, that's completely understandable.

i hope things get better. {i know that's lame and mundane and 'everyone' says it, but i do mean it}

I understand.

Good Luck.

:arms:

We love you!
xoxoxoxox

Yet again, another superbly written chapter, with no grammatical or spelling errors.
Well done!

I kinda get the eeling that Gerard and Frank are going crazy withoiut each other...

Is his Grandpa angry at him? Did he tell him that he loved Gerard?

xoxoxox

poor frankie

wow....i loved that chapter and that last line blew me away, really it did. in essence isn't that all we do, slowly destroy ourselves till we actually do end up six feet under...

i have a feeling frank's grandpa can see through frank's front and wants the truth, but will wiat out till frank's ready to spill it.

can't wait for more !

It seems I'm always saying thanks but I really mean it. I want to thank all of you that have kept faith in this story and continue to comment; it means more than any of you could ever really know. So, thank you, guys, so very much. I love you all.

I swear I'll try to update tomorrow; I wasn't able to today.

<3 Jenn

poor gerard

that was...that was an intense update....you amaze me each and every update with amount of intensity and emotion you portray....you have a way with words my dear!

Well written
but i don't understand... did Gerard throw the vase? if so , how did they BOTH get hurt?

more soon
xoxox

Good chapter :)

I liked the effect of Frank's mind whirling and dancing kinda out of control...

I hope he's gonna be ok

xoxoxox

wow, i just, my heart goes out to frank each and every update...with the few exceptions of going out to gerard sometimes...but frank, i liked this update, it was lighter in a way...he seemed to have a small break from everything in that moment with james...even if it wasn't spent listening to james....and i like how james knows people lose on purpose to him...it's like a slap in the face for frank i think, you're not alone is what comes to mind, in a sense....could just be how my mind is working at the moment though...great update though!

greaty update

well written update

you're such a.. mature writer. That's the only word i can think of at the momnet to describe the way you write, and your ideas.
I love this story so much, and I loved the symbolism of the house of cards being life.
And that Frankie is an Angel that is being tied down.

update soon :)

xoxox

i'm pretty much speechless....

i don't know what to say to that incredible update--so much was portrayed and the beauty of the emotions present--just wow.