omg omg i love benny so much. it was very neat, we got to see into benny a little bit, when you said about him being terrified and such. like aphorism said, i feel like benny would be my favorite if he were alive.
Whennnn will you be posting the next chapter!! I am dying to find out what happens!! I love it when stories get really intense like this and then come together and fit perfectly at the end! So excited, please post! :D
I feel like if Benny was in the story I would really like him. Like.. he would be my favorite character. He just seems like he would be that guy.
I love this story so much. I'm so happy with you for writing it. I don't even know how you think to combine all these words and sentences to make something so... wonderful. It's truly remarkable. I can't wait for the next chapter and I don't know what else to say.
Except that I"m excited. Finally, we're getting answers.
Oh, and I knew it was Matt. I don't like him. He can go... somewhere bad. Not to hell, but somewhere terrifying.
Something about Chapter 13 reminds me of The Great Gatsby when Nick Carraway comes to visit his cousin Daisy. Have you ever read the book? Otherwise you won't know what I'm talking about. Lol.
This story is incredible! From the way it's written to the relationship between the characters, this isn't like anything I've read. I wish I had it in book form. :)
i thought matt raped her, but how did benny save her life ?!? ooohhhh this is getting so goood ! i can't contain myself. this is lovely. i love the story.
Why did I think this was updated? I looked in my subscriptions list and clicked the title and then the last chapter and re-read the whole thing and was like "I've read this before" and then I realized it was the last update. I felt stupid, but at least I read the last chapter again and loved it more.
Just thought I'd put that fit of absent mindedness out there.
Ahhh I just read a whole bunch of chapters and I loved every one of them.
I also listened to that song by Angus and Julia Stone. I loved that too.
Annnnddd... I think I'm really digging william. Even though he isn't like IN IN IN IN IN the story, he's there and I like him being there. He's one of my favorites because he's so... he's so into Nick, and it drives me nuts. I don't think he belongs with Nick though... Nick belongs with Ellie even though I don't think it will ever happen. He belongs with Ellie without being with Ellie.
I don't have any idea what happened with Matt, but I still don't like him even though William thinks nothing is wrong with him. I like William, but not enough to like Matt.
and because i can't say anything else,
AWE SNAP GURL