The Great Awakening - Comments

Great story! Can't wait to read more!

Dude, this story is awesome. Keep it up!

This story, awesome. BAM! Update. :)

DUDE. this story is so good. Like... WRITE MORE. NOW. I COMMAND YOU.

oh jewel, you're doing fantastic. i love this story more and more with each chapter. and mason is so cute in this, i just want to grab him by his curls and go all nngngnnghhhh on him. love. <3

(ps. my story is still in works, HONESTLY. it's just that with my new job, my days consist of work and sleeping and that's it. no time for anything else, really)

Okay, let me just start out by saying I think this story is absolutely brilliant. Your writing style is fantastic, and you had me hooked from the start. I love the fact that even though it's written in third person, we're really getting an inside look at how Mia's thinking through everything, how close her and Kevin are and what kind of relationship they had prior to and following his accident.

You make me feel bad for Mia, who doesn't really have any other friends than Kevin, and how she's really given up a lot of what she really wanted just so she and Kevin can still be so close to each other. In a sense, she's living a sheltered life, even though she's traveled all over the world, and I think that all of that just might change with Mason. I thought it was interesting that you mentioned that Mia was a free-spirited person because that's usually what most people think about Mason, yet they seem like two completely different people.

And then you have Mason and Kevin, who really are two opposite people, when it comes to which is most important in their lives--relationships or snowboarding. And, I think it's going to be interesting to see what comes about because of Mia and if anything changes with their priorities and how they view life. Plus, I wonder if there's going to be a strain put on Mason and Kevin's relationship (well, obviously there will be, it's just yet to be determined how much so) with Mason now wanting to spend time with Mia. It's obvious that Kevin is very protective of Mia, and in a sense, he's sort of possessive of her, whether he means to be or not.

As I've already said, I'm in love with this story already, and I really can't wait to see what happens next. This has been fantastic to read so far, and I'm looking forward to future updates!

Haha I love how Kevin reacted.
I love this story!
:)

I loved the update! I cant wait to see what happens on their date and how far their relationship will go and how kevin reacts! More soon please!

Wow...Man you serious can write! It's crazy how good you are, you must here this all the time, but mann, you can write! This was seriously beautifully written! It's unbelieveable.

I feel like I'm Mia when I'm writing it, though I can't really place how it'd feel to be their with someone who doesn't remember you at all. That would be so hard to do, I know I'd say I'd definently stay by that persons side, but it must be so hard for Mia to second guess things and ask herself if she should stay with Kevin or leave. Kevin doesn't remember her, and is getting angry sometimes with her, that must break her heart, I don't if I could stand so many mouths there being with him.

Mia's Kevins best friend, you'd think he'd tell everyone how amazing she is and everything about to her his friends, but it doesn't seem like he has. Of course he speaks highly of her when asked about her, but I'm still kind of questioning Kevin. You can see that Mias in love with him, but was he too? Did he love Mia..did he just not want to share her with his friends, or was he just overprotective? Good I really wanna hear more of what their friendship was like, at least in Kevins mind. Mia gave up everything for him, didn't follow her own dreams, did Kevin know that? He's so lucky to have a girl like her by his side.

I feel so bad for Mia. She's so alone, because of the situaton. But here comes Mason to the rescue! This is going to be so interesting! Mason's already questioning it. He wants to stay with her, put a smile on her face. Thats so sweet! He doesn't even know her that well. But he knows she's special to Kevin and hes feeling something inside, you can tell! God I just love Mason Aguirre and Kevin Pearce, so I'm pretty much dieing when reading this story! God, I hope you update soon!

asjahsjahs, i'm meltingggg jewel

I loved the update! I cant wait to see what you have planned for this story! More soon please!

I LOVE this story! I cant wait to see what happens between her and Mason! more soon please!

if you're going to update this only when i get my kevin story out, i am going to die in the meanwhile and never get kevin done. hint. or you know, a threat.

read it.
loved it.
it makes me happpy (:
& so do you, my dear.

i haven't even read this yet, but i saw it was about mason and i was like OHMIGODOHMIGODOHMIGODOHMIGODOHMIGODOHMIGODOHMIGODOHMIGODOHMIGOD.
seriously.
so excited.

just came across your story. Like the other comments before me can't wait for more to see where you take the story.

I am loving this story so far. It's beautifully written, and it's just perfect! I do feel bad for Mia, having an internal battle with herself about whether she should stay or not. Plus, she's not really close to any of Kevin's friends, and it seems as if her only real, true friend is Kevin, and that no one's really there for her at all. And, I can't imagine what Kevin's going through, having Mia there for him all the time, but not really remembering her that well. It must be awful for the two of them. And, then there's Mason who's going to fix it all! I really am in love with this story, and I can't wait to read some more!

<3

This is an amazing story!!! You're a fantastic writer! I love the story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter.

AAAAHHHH I'M DYING DYING DEAD. i can now go to sleep as a happy girl, have happy dreams about mason and wake up as a happy girl for having happy dreams about mason. yes i do sound like a complete moron right now, i'm aware of it.

and i want to hug kevin to bits and pieces and i want to do the same to you as well. ngngngg. i love it so far, i really do. and i'm going to annoy and pester and blackmail the shit out of you for updates.

ps. make sure your character picture has dark dark brown hair and sexy blue eyes, ay :D