Cinderella Man - Comments

loved it!!!!
upload soon!!!!

(: Update soon, please. This story is fantastic. I love the details and how realistic it seems.

OH MY GOSH!
She's pregnant?! WTF?
And ohhhh yeah..
New reader. :)
I honestly don't really like Eminem,
but I'm already falling in love with this story.
So yeah..
Update soon?! :D <333

DONT GIVE UP THE KID!!!
Awesome chapter
-Emm

That woman! She made me so mad! Ready for an update alreay. Snap to it!

You can't just stop there :o
ABORTION?!?
Pleaseee update soon!

uh oh smuckoh.
that is one bun that cant be undone.....unless you do as she is going to do.
is this going to turn into one of those unoh- im preggo stories?
not that that isnt a good twist. just please dont do the cliche and have him beg her to keep it then she gives into to him then they have to try to make it work. i know that might be your direction and thats ok.... just please be original about it if you are going to do it.
personaly i think it would be better to have her get one then go through all that emotional trauma and have him be there for her. that would be interesting too....

this is way too long, sorry.
whatever you do im sure it will be good. ^^

Ready for a new update! Hurry it up! Snap to it!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT. :)

As soon as she was complaining she was sick and her stomach turned when she looked at him, I was like, "Hmmm... Maybe she's pregnant." And she is. WILL SHE KEEP THE KIDDIE?

Update soon? :)

Is this Shady with or without his kids with Kim? No¡ you just left me hanging! I need more¡ update tonight or tomorrow! I need more. I'm addicted and I'm trusting you to feed my addiction. Please?! How much more do I have to beg? Please! I need this next update like Bella needed Edward. Oh god! The thought of waiting hurts. Do you want to hurt me?! Please! Oh! It hurts. I demand an update! Now now! Go go!

Chapter five: I thought he was going to rape her! I felt so bad for Shady! I love him!

Second chapter comment: I'm so glad I found this story. In the first few paragraphs there is a tense shift. I personally love the story in past tense. I love the details provided. She sounds like me with her cooking/cleaning.

i knew she was prego from the beginning.
But hows Marshall going to react

Nosey Nosey Marshall!
I knew she was pregnant by the first sentence in the second paragraph
can't wait for next add
-Emm

First Chapter: Wonderfully funny and witty! I enjoyed all the misinterpereted sexual humor! It was classic. The only flaw would be the use of present tense. The use of present tense seemed to weaken to chapter. My brain couldn't get over the present tense word, is. Love the story! I will become a loyal reader in no time.

0.o
*she
xDD
I dunno what I was thinking.
Oh! And I seriously love you for making this story
:)

Wow, one would think that should would just go to a clinic to see if she's pregnant.
Marshall better not hold his tongue on that.

Oh lord

Uh oh!!! LOL now she is pregnate!!! this is gonna get really good!!!

they are both so in-denial they need to be slapped.
they need to get together, and like soon. haha
:)

Either way, I love this story :)