thanks for the update! i really like this chapter. most of it flows really well, the only part i would comment on is on the transition when you suddenly have them back at the office and she is thinking about how she is hitting her law books hard. it is a bit too abrupt and made me do a double take to make sure i hadnt missed a paragraph.
i really enjoy the depth of Aubrey's character that we are seeing. good character development!
im reading this and laughing cause i am actually in a courthouse law library while writing this. made me thing about aubrey ^^
I agree with you on the whole Twilight thing, I liked the books, like the plot and all of that, but vampire’s are not supposed to sparkle in the sunlight, they’re supposed to burst into flames, and turn to dust.
Oh, and I like this story so far too. J It’s very good. I hope that you’ll update soon so that I can continue reading it happily.
I am loving this story so far. It is spectacu-lacular. x] I want you to update as soon as possible, por favor. Do take your time though, I'm willing to be patient with this story.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! but she's not just another fuck toy, I hope he makes sure she knows that or else there will be hell to pay. for him, not you because you're too awesome :D