May 1st, 2010 at 02:15pm
Cinderella Man - Comments
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(: Update soon, please. This story is fantastic. I love the details and how realistic it seems.May 1st, 2010 at 05:22am
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OH MY GOSH!
She's pregnant?! WTF?
And ohhhh yeah..
New reader. :)
I honestly don't really like Eminem,
but I'm already falling in love with this story.
So yeah..
Update soon?! :D <333May 1st, 2010 at 03:29am -
DONT GIVE UP THE KID!!!
Awesome chapter
-EmmMay 1st, 2010 at 03:07am -
That woman! She made me so mad! Ready for an update alreay. Snap to it!May 1st, 2010 at 03:04am
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You can't just stop there :o
ABORTION?!?
Pleaseee update soon!April 30th, 2010 at 03:32pm -
uh oh smuckoh.
that is one bun that cant be undone.....unless you do as she is going to do.
is this going to turn into one of those unoh- im preggo stories?
not that that isnt a good twist. just please dont do the cliche and have him beg her to keep it then she gives into to him then they have to try to make it work. i know that might be your direction and thats ok.... just please be original about it if you are going to do it.
personaly i think it would be better to have her get one then go through all that emotional trauma and have him be there for her. that would be interesting too....
this is way too long, sorry.
whatever you do im sure it will be good. ^^April 29th, 2010 at 01:41am -
Ready for a new update! Hurry it up! Snap to it!April 28th, 2010 at 10:06pm
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT.IKNEWIT. :)
As soon as she was complaining she was sick and her stomach turned when she looked at him, I was like, "Hmmm... Maybe she's pregnant." And she is. WILL SHE KEEP THE KIDDIE?
Update soon? :)April 28th, 2010 at 09:48pm -
Is this Shady with or without his kids with Kim? No¡ you just left me hanging! I need more¡ update tonight or tomorrow! I need more. I'm addicted and I'm trusting you to feed my addiction. Please?! How much more do I have to beg? Please! I need this next update like Bella needed Edward. Oh god! The thought of waiting hurts. Do you want to hurt me?! Please! Oh! It hurts. I demand an update! Now now! Go go!April 28th, 2010 at 04:28am
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Chapter five: I thought he was going to rape her! I felt so bad for Shady! I love him!April 28th, 2010 at 03:52am
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Second chapter comment: I'm so glad I found this story. In the first few paragraphs there is a tense shift. I personally love the story in past tense. I love the details provided. She sounds like me with her cooking/cleaning.April 28th, 2010 at 03:21am
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i knew she was prego from the beginning.
But hows Marshall going to reactApril 28th, 2010 at 02:33am -
Nosey Nosey Marshall!
I knew she was pregnant by the first sentence in the second paragraph
can't wait for next add
-EmmApril 28th, 2010 at 02:25am -
First Chapter: Wonderfully funny and witty! I enjoyed all the misinterpereted sexual humor! It was classic. The only flaw would be the use of present tense. The use of present tense seemed to weaken to chapter. My brain couldn't get over the present tense word, is. Love the story! I will become a loyal reader in no time.April 28th, 2010 at 02:24am
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0.o
*she
xDD
I dunno what I was thinking.
Oh! And I seriously love you for making this story
:)April 28th, 2010 at 02:03am -
Wow, one would think that should would just go to a clinic to see if she's pregnant.
Marshall better not hold his tongue on that.April 28th, 2010 at 02:01am -
Oh lordApril 28th, 2010 at 01:53am
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Uh oh!!! LOL now she is pregnate!!! this is gonna get really good!!!April 28th, 2010 at 01:51am
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they are both so in-denial they need to be slapped.
they need to get together, and like soon. haha
:)
Either way, I love this story :)April 28th, 2010 at 01:47am
upload soon!!!!