Sorry for not commenting too btw! I was at the beach, and just got to read it! Damn girl, you gotta keep writin more of this. This is amazing. :] I cant wait to read more. :)
rushing?! your not rushing fast enough! i love it, especially her continued independence and strength of character even after she left and is preggo. keep the updats comming!
honey, no baby weighs 30 pounds by itself. Marshall's sperm impregnated her with twins. I just know it. Like...you know when you're pregnant...or super full (like I am). Women know these things. She has to be with twins.
Or having a really fat baby. Hopefully C-section. 'Cause you know...if she doesn't get that then she'll be loose like his other assistant.
You were right in the AN. You did rush it to my disappointment. You should have expanded the Marshall office scene and added more of a description to Aubrey's job. I would love knowing what the place feels like and whatnot.
I think something is going to happen with her boss. He seemed creepy; like he was plotting getting her into bed.
I thought that 30 pounds was a bit excessive for only the third month. You should commit to a little more research because I know you're a good writer and you can pull off a great story. I also thought that the depression didn't feel real enough. It was much to quick and didn't torment her to pieces.
You said Em had 3 kids. Who's the other one? I know there's Hailie and the girl he adopted from Kim's sister. I can't remember the third.
I like the update. You still show a good word choice and I feel spoiled with all the updates! Keep it up. I probably supply the longest comments ever, but I hope they help you!
You are an amazing writer.
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