I just read all 17 chapters today, I couldn't log off because this story is the definition of awesome! I can not wait for the next update, this story is like a mix of romance and comedy and I love it!
I'm back to my usual hardcore commenting self! Ready? I thought the pregnancy was unrealistic. Two months doesn't show enough to be noticeable. I liked her internal battle. I liked the bit at the end with Em and his daughter. It made me think of how she would view him as a daddy.
You're editing remains strong but there was one error. It was the bit about depression. I thought the word should have been either depressive or depressing instead of depression.
I am finally back on a computer so I can comment, phone internet wouldnt let me! GRRR!! Love the updates!!! And YAY! So glad she's keeping it but Marshall cannot just give up like that! More soon??
how could you just LEAVE it like that?!?! have you no heart?! have you no soul?!?! you ARE updating again soon right? well... im going to be on a plane tomarow SO YOU HAVE LEFT ME HANGING UNTIL I CAN GET INTERNET AGAIN! humph *sits in her corner and glares silver daggers at writer*