I know Kye was a bastard, but he didn't deserve that. I had a dream once that The Black Parade came for me, then either Frank or Mikey, cant remember, pulled me on the float and I just stood there 'till, get this, the guy I liked jumped up on the float. Then The Black Parade started to play again, then the guy I like, call him Luke(thats not his name, btw) and me jumped down and walked beside the parade. It was awesome!!!
Eh, decent I guess. Very short. A few errors like "Wondered" should be "Wandered" and "emoes" should be "emos". You confused woman for women. Were you even there on the English lesson before the last one? Whatever, 6/10 for the whole thing (I'm fairly harsh, so this is a decent score)