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  • hunky dory

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    This is like watching CSI. Honestly, with some editing, it may one day make an amazing mystery novel. I'll keep my eyes peeled.

    July's death was interesting. Or, should I say murder?
    Interesting, interesting.
    Update soon!
    March 21st, 2010 at 10:27am
  • pakistani.princess

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    this is amazing (:
    i have a hunch on who the killer is..
    hmm..
    March 21st, 2010 at 04:45am
  • HeAteMyHeart.

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    hmmmh this story really makes you think on who the killer may be...
    update soon!!!!!
    March 21st, 2010 at 04:28am
  • oheyimkelly

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    Interesting.....
    March 21st, 2010 at 03:50am
  • oheyimkelly

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    So far so good =)
    March 21st, 2010 at 03:49am
  • The Colour of Music

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    WOW this is an awsome story! its so different to other stories!
    I love the idea of it!
    plase update soon?
    =D
    March 19th, 2010 at 05:58am
  • Bring On The Rain.

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    can't wait til next update :) I freaking loveee this story!!!
    March 17th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • HeAteMyHeart.

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    man, i love this story.
    a real good mystery!
    update soon!!!! X3
    March 16th, 2010 at 10:25am
  • hunky dory

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    Simply amazing, honestly.
    One of the more brilliant plots I've encountered on this site.
    I'm in love with your originality.
    Please update soon!
    March 16th, 2010 at 10:02am
  • Elephant PJs

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    Yeah, sorry about the wait. Loads of homework unfortunately. But thanks alot for the great feedback! Yup, they're all different too. Took a while to think of the different ways but I managed to get there.
    March 16th, 2010 at 09:41am
  • modern mariah.

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    I've been waiting for you to update, haha. I liked seeing how June functioned, before she was just the drunk one. Poor girls. I actually like seeing you come up with all the different deaths, it's quite fascinating.
    March 16th, 2010 at 09:34am
  • Black Angel

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    Love it :)
    March 15th, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • Surferbabecris

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    please keep writing. .
    i wanna know what happens.
    ^_^_^_^_^
    March 5th, 2010 at 12:57pm
  • Psycho.

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    This Story Is Really Good, This Is Gonna Sound Soo Weird But I Can't Wait To Find Out How The Rest Die, Yes I'm Abnormal >.<

    Ooh You Know What, This Is Good Enough To Be Published One Day I Think, I Think A Lot Of Stuff... BUT I Have A Good Feeling About This Story.
    March 1st, 2010 at 12:37am
  • ThtDramaticGirl

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    WHAT IDIOT LEAVES THE HOUSE ALONE WHEN SHE KNOWS SHES GONNA DIE?!!?!?! sorry had 2 say it anyway two really good chapters!
    February 28th, 2010 at 08:27pm
  • modern mariah.

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    I love this, I haven't seen a good mystery on here in a long time. I love how smart March was with the photographs. I feel so bad for the other sisters. Was this family cursed or something? XD
    February 28th, 2010 at 08:05am
  • Bring On The Rain.

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    Wow that was sad but really good. Update soon!!!!!!
    February 27th, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • Black Angel

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    i need more! :D Updatee soon!
    February 27th, 2010 at 05:41pm
  • carousel kid.

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    This is really good, i'm subscribing.
    February 27th, 2010 at 09:56am
  • Surferbabecris

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    please update. . .
    i love it so far. .
    February 27th, 2010 at 03:36am
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