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  • greenlvr21

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    AGGGG! you're killin me with this. Garret needs to realize sooon
    September 27th, 2010 at 10:48pm
  • revenge_is_mine

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    hmmmm, i like this :) and i just want garrett and anika to be together already. or at least friends
    July 6th, 2010 at 06:44pm
  • la dispute.

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    I'm so upset with Garrett. I mean, seriously.
    Granted, Ani didn't call to tell him she was coming back home,
    But he's still supposed to be her best friend and he acted
    Like a total douche. He didn't even try and stick up for her,
    Or anything. I'd be more pissed at him, if I were Annie, than I would be
    Pissed at him. I can't wait for more! (:
    June 25th, 2010 at 03:16pm
  • la dispute.

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    Ha. I loved Mi in this chapter. She was sassy, but funny. Witty, would be the word
    I guess. Lol. I really hope that something didn't happen while Anika was gone.
    I mean, although she said Anika didn't do anything wrong,
    I have a feeling somethig changed.
    I can't wait for more! (:
    June 2nd, 2010 at 09:25am
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    Oh, Anika, what are we going to do with you? Lol. I was happy that she was returning home, but then her worries made me sad for her. I hope everything works out when she gets home.
    June 1st, 2010 at 11:11am
  • la dispute.

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    Awe. I'm glad that her and Molly's relationship has improved, although it doesn't stay like that forever. And I felt bad for Jackson. I mean, he seemed like such a sweet guy and worthy to at least try loving, but I guess when you're in love with someone else, they're all you care about. I can't wait to see how things are going to go once she gets back home! (:
    May 17th, 2010 at 06:44am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Mean family
    May 17th, 2010 at 04:49am
  • SweetPrinceNiall

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    AHH
    did you know your an absolutely AMAZING writer!?!
    i legitly stayed up till 4am reading this :S :P
    ahha anyways
    UPDATE SOON <3
    May 8th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • la dispute.

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    Damnit. I loved that chapter! Lol.
    It was so sweet, and such an intimate moment for Ani and Garrett.
    I admit, I was surprised to see him there. But then again, I should have known that he would
    Show up. Garrett's always amazing like that! Lol.
    And their little kissing scene ... I thought they were going to get all hot and heavy, and lost in the
    Moment, hahaa, but Garrett would have to be the sensible one!
    I truly hope that she does okay in Germany, and that Garrett does keep in contact, like he promised!
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:26am
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    There wasn't a whole lot of action, but the chapter was amazing, nonetheless! I always love reading her and Garrett's alone time. Hahaa. It's just always so fucking adorable, the way he cares for her and whatnot! I'm glad that at least this goodbye went a lot better than the previous one. I can't wait for more! (:
    May 5th, 2010 at 04:20am
  • DinoKat

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    Poor ani I just want him to kidnap her ): this was amazing
    May 4th, 2010 at 07:48am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Aww

    Can I just say I love the backround lol
    May 4th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • la dispute.

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    Awe. I'm super glad that Garrett came back, because she needed him. Like, really fucking bad. Even though I kinda get upset that she treats Evan so bad, I guess, in a way, I understand. I can't wait for more! (:
    April 30th, 2010 at 12:53am
  • greenlvr21

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    **words**
    April 29th, 2010 at 12:40pm
  • greenlvr21

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    I love this story, the emotions that you can capture in wprds is really unbelievable.
    April 29th, 2010 at 12:39pm
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    correction: "Ok, I think it’s clear to you now, how much I love, love, LOVE your story." :D
    April 29th, 2010 at 08:37am
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    I’ve finished reading this and just WOW!
    Sorry it took such a long time, my reading was delayed for four days because my brother had to take the computer to a shop to get it reformatted for god knows what reason.
    I really love this, seriously. I haven’t read a story that has made me sob this much before. I really, really, really love the way you write, it’s like, you describe the feelings they feel so well that it made me feel like I was the one feeling them, like I were in your characters’ place. And I love all the relationships/couples here, from Mia and John’s, Evan and Ariel’s to the main one; Garrett and Ani’s – you really, I don’t know just… GOOD JOB! You are brilliant dude, seriously. Like, no joke. Ok, I think it’s clear to you now, how much love, love, LOVE. :D
    I am really anxious to know what happens next! I hope you update soon! :D
    April 29th, 2010 at 08:35am
  • DinoKat

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    I just want him to take her with him mama (if you can even call her that) should just let her go since she doesn't want her yeah good idea? any who I loved this lots your an amazing writer
    April 29th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Garret came back!
    April 29th, 2010 at 06:03am
  • DinoKat

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    Although it bugged me about how hot it was in January (it never reaches 80-90 here in January) I have to say that I seriously felt the pain Ani did it made me cry and I'm super happy I pulled an all nighter just to finish this. Everything about the ending tore my heart into pieces I have never once read something this impacting and amazing! you are a remarkable writer
    April 25th, 2010 at 08:17pm