Seventeen and Invincible - Comments

I understand Evan saying that he knew she didn't want to be stopped, because it
Was a release for her, but I still think that he should of done something then, because
Maybe she wouldn't have gotten as far as trying to kill herself.
And that whole conversation ... just, WOW!
I completely have a different look on Evan and his character.
I mean, yes, he cheated, but I could see why he would, although I don't think cheating is ever okay.
If he felt that, he should of just broken up with her.
I feel bad for Anika, because of how she's feeling right now. I just hope she doesn't do something
Stupid.

update sooon

Jaylee, I love the way you're able to describe her hurt. You get the exact detail and emotion
Through, flawlessly. I sort of laughed when she found in the drawer, although it wasn't exactly
Funny. It's just that Garrett already knew what she would try to do.
And I knew that she would be mad at Garrett for saying no, because I think I said it in the last
Comment: he'd promised that if she asked, he would stay, but he said no.
And when I read the part where she said he was no better than the boy holding me in his arms,
I figured it wasn't Garrett - but I just thought maybe it was some boy. Lol.
I loved this chapter so much, even though it was a sad one.

I definetly cried when Garret left :'( So sad I hate Goodbyes

Garret needs to come back. I'm glad the knife is gone

This got to me so much.
It's always hard to say goodbye. I've had to do it plenty of times. It never gets easier, though,
You think it would.

“No! Garrett! No, Garrett, I need you. I’m telling you I need you. You told me that if I needed you, you’d stay. You promised me. Garrett, you said you’d stay if I asked.” He managed to unwrap my arms from his neck and hold my hands at a little less than arms length. “No,” I said brokenly.

That really got to me. I hate that she broke down so much, but it's understandable.
I'm actually surprised that Garrett didn't give in, because he usually does.
I can't wait for more! (:

Goodbyes suck :(

Gah. That goodbye was sad, but at least Ani didn't cry a whole lot.
I imagine she will when Garrett actually walks away, but for now, I'm glad they're
Going to have one last cup of coffee together; or, the last one for awhile, anyway.
(:

Aww

So, I thin it's safe to say that I hate her mother much more now, than I did before. She had no right to talk to Anika like that, especially when she's in the hospital. And she definitely had no right talking like that to Garrett, when he's been the only one therefor her from the start. But I'm glad that she's getting out of the hospital. I'm just sad that they're both going to be leaving eachother soon.

I love how Garrett doesn't give up.
Even when she begs to be let go of, he just holds on tighter.
I think we all need someone in our lives who is like that.
The ending was cute, despite the drool.
Even if it is G-Dawg, drool is a no no! Lol. (:

That whole chapter was just too adorable. Well, on Garrett's part.
He loves her so much, but he's also so deeply in denial. It's aggrivating. Lol.
And Ani needs to realize how much all of her friends love her, especially Garrett.
And his line at the end, "I'm too selfish", just made me awe. I love that boy! Lol. (;

Lovin this waaaay more than i thought i would :D

I love this, so much. I read both stories, and it's just, amazing.
You're such a good writer, and that last chapter... I, it's so saddening...

That chapter brought me to tears, I admit.
Just . . . the way Garrett was blaming himself, and the way you described his emotions,
They really got to me.
I'm glad that she's okay, although I knew all along she would be, for obvious reasons, lol.
But still, I'm glad she's okay, because now Garrett can be okay. Ya know? (:

I think you chose the right person to find her; Mia.
Even though she's closest to Garrett, Mia just seemed to be the
Right person to me. This chapter was so sad, yet, so amazing
At the same time. I felt like I was right there with them.
I can only imagine how Garrett feels ... I don't even know
What I would do if I were him.
But I lover what he said at the ending. It shows how much he
Truly loves and cares for Anika.

That was such a sad chapter. Sigh.
I recognized the ending scene from the prequel.
And even though I'd read it before, it still made me sad, lol.
I still feel bad that they had that huge argument, and right before they
Both have to leave.

Damn you, Garrett..
He always wants to drag her to a party, knowing she hates them, and then just ditch her.
And top of that, he always ends up making out with someone. Dumbass.
I'm glad Mia and John were there.
They're amazing friends, and I love Mia's character.

Agh. Garrett really gets on my nerves, sometimes.
Like, he knows how Anika gets, but yet he makes out with her,
And then when she wants more, he uses the 'we're only best friends' line.
If that were the case, they wouldn't be making out in the first place. Lol.
Well, Ani's secret it sort of out now.
I wonder if Garrett will question what she said later.
I really loved the update, Jaylee! You had me I'm tears at the end. Lol. (:

I'm glad they're on good terms again.
And I really, really, really wanted them to have a little make-out scene in the shower,
Just for the hell of it. Hahaa.