Moonbeam - Comments

Are you going to continue with this story? I love it so much(:

OH MY GOODNESS. I FINALLY GOT AROUND TO READING CHAPTER TWO AND HOLY CRAP.

Yeahh hahaa I always get excited about your stories. Mannn I'm so curious about what Ann did for them to get kicked out... I must read more to find out haha. This was so not what I was expecting. Usually stories about angels and stuff like that is corny. But this isn't at all! I love it. (:

UM.

Excuse my language, but HOLY SHIT. Yeah. Just had to say it, because that first chapter was like full of epicness. I can't believe I haven't read this sooner... I always love your stories and man, oh man this is freaking awesome, I can tell.

Nice update, and I liked the third person point of view for Damien. I don't know, it kind of reminds me that he's not the MAIN person, but still important enough to get his side of the story... I might be wrong though xD

Hope to see more =]

I really like Damien so far, and I really want to know what happened with that necklace!
Also, I thought third person was fine
update soon :D

I'm not sure where this story is going to go...The suspense is keeping me on the edge of my seat. Please save me by updating before I fall off.

I just finished reading all five chapters you have up so far, and wow is all I an say.
I love the way you wrote this. It has the perfect amount of description, but keeps a bit to the imagination. I love the emotions this provokes.
My only think is, I like the new guy more than Clark so far. Weird, I know.
I hope you get through what's happening in your life babe. Just remember, bad times always come to an end. In other words, good/fun times will come =]

Uggh

I am so addicted to this story
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:D

Thank you for finding the time to update. :D

I really, really, really want to know who that new mystery guy is!
Lovely, chapter :]

Truly amazing. I think this is a good story to have around while you're going through your stuff. What you deal with and what she deals with, different yes but still quite a lot of turmoil running through both minds. I think that having gone through this will give you new depth with this already wonderful character of Ann. I love the story and I hope you can return to more writing in it soon. No pressure though. You take your time.

OH my Frickin God. This is going to be so amazing, I will be breathless every time I read a new chapter. You've got talent, my friend.

I love this. It's so mysterious and different than anything I've ever read. :)

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pretty damn awesome :) I can't wait to read more. I'm dying to know why they fell lol <3

Gosh, this is so lovely. Well, not what's happening to Ann, but oh the way you describe things really makes me feel like it's happening right in front of me. I love it(:

Beautifully written and very original. Good grammar, spelling, and beautiful layout. Interesting characters, relationships, and emotions. Two thumbs up. I hope that you find the time to update soon because I am definitely looking forward to more.

uh oh what's Clark going to do?!
loved the chapter :]

Beautiful. I really like the halfway-house type thing set up for them. Tom seems like a really awesome character. Can't wait for more. Keep it up.

He's so bipolar! First he's all, oh, remember how we used to love each other? Then, he's screaming that he wants her to die. It's crazy - but totally understandable, because he still loves her, but he hates her now too. And I can really sympathize with Ann, being completely confused and terrified by the all-consuming darkness. It's really awful - but it's so good! I love this story :)

awww! poor ann. :(
What did she do that mad him hate her so???