Moonbeam - Comments

Poor Ann... it must be difficult to serve a punishment when you don't know the crime, I probably would have snapped back in the first chapter xD

Aah! Bad Clark. He's so mean to her. Giving her such loving memories and then being so rotten just makes it even worse how cruelly he's acting. Poor Ann. Reading this I want to just beat Clark up.You have pulled me in that much in just three chapters. Really astounding work.

ohh this is so eerie.... and the characters are so mysterious.... I swear I had goosebumps!
Love it!

As always, I loved it. How he can still seem so cold outwardly, while inside his fire is burning. He seems much more human now. And to see what they had and lost really drives into the reader what he's feeling and what she feels once she sees it. You can tell there's good left in him, as much as he seems like an evil prick right now. It's awesome and I can't wait for more.

This is fantastic so far. You really know how to wrap a reader in. I love it :)

Okay, I am hooked. :P
Love it! Can't wait for the updates!!!

I was intrigued from the very beginning. You have a gift in writing; It almost flawless! I look forward to your update.

Way awesome. It's kind of scary right now, being in that dark unknown place with this cold unknown man who attacked her. Excellent start, can't wait for more of the same excellence.

Mika it looks great i can't wait!!!! :D

I'm just gonna come out and say it.
I'm really excited for this, cause it looks great(:

I'm just gonna come out and say it.
I'm really excited for this, cause it looks great(: