Just Like Paradise - Comments

oh my god....i LOVED the update! very entertaining and eventful, can't wait to see what's gonna happen!!!

Legit, new fucking favorite story ever.
I laughed out like like 48654657 times.
Cougars sending Tyler a drink?
Back of bitchesssss.
Creepy MEN hitting on Abby?
Ick.
Tyler & Nate getting tattoos just like dad?
WIN.
Tyler blurting out that his LITTLE brother had sex with Bergie & Kara's daughter in front of the entire family?
Awkward.
Yeah, I love this.
More soon. <3

okay, so i love this story. i've only read the sequel (i'll read the prequel on the wweekend =D) but i am legitimately in love with this. i can't get over the protectiveness that runs in the family. i mean, it literally makes my stomach woozy when the boys show how protective they are of abby and brianna. and that scene? with abby and the stupid frat boys? it was so sad! i wanted tyler to kick some serious ass!

by far, chapter three was the best chapter (and that's saying a lot becuase i am in love with the other two chapters as well). your writing is brilliant! i love this story and i can't wait for more! i'm just really surprised that you don't have more comments.. though i hope that doesn't keep you from updating =) <33

“Here baby girl, just for you.” TJ pulled out Abby’s chair at breakfast the next morning
oh gawd. the love he has for his daughter is just absolutely adorable.

When they were young and TJ wasn’t around as much, he felt like that’s when his Mom needed him more than ever, and even though his father was always around now, he never lost that aspect of his personality.
OH MY GOD! YOU'RE SO ADORABLE TY!!! :D <3 <3 and here i was about to be like.. tyler doesn't love me like nate does.. :p

“Just exploring, maybe get some shopping done.” He added with a grin as she wiggled in her seat excitedly as Tyler and Nate exchanged unamused looks. “Then I was thinking we could go surfing.” He added to please his two sons.
TJ just knows how to please everyone doesnt he ;D

“This is from the woman across the bar.” She smiled subtly as Tyler’s eyebrows shot up into his hairline as he looked down at the Mimosa.
excuse me?? i don't think i head her right....

two blonde cougars
WHAT THE FUCK.

“Ew.” Brianna scrunched up her nose. “That’s disgusting, Tyler, those women are older than me.” She added as Abby giggled hysterically, burying her face into her Dad’s shoulder. Brianna snatched the mimosa before Tyler could take a sip, lifting the glass in the women’s direction before taking a drink herself. “Yes, I’ll definitely need a nap after this.” She commented.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE MYSELF! FUCK OFF BITCHES. MY KID! NOT YOUR BOY TOY.

“No.” He replied as she tried to make her eyes big, something that usually worked, but she wasn’t so sure about today.
HAHAHAHHAA. oh abbs, those eyes will never work when it comes to something that would pull you away from being daddy's little girl

both of them grinning as Abby tied one around TJ’s wrist
ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 i love the father-daughter love <3 if gets me everytime.

“Just don’t tell your Mom.”
TJ Oshie.. everyday you are a bigger pain in my ass then the one before. why am i always the bad parent!?!? don't tell mom.. fucker.

He cautiously pushed the door open and quickly pulled it shut at the sight of a strange woman using the toilet. “Uh! Sorry lady!” He quickly apologized
HAHAHAHAHHAHA! I STARTED LAUGHING SO HARD I HAD A COUGH ATTACK!

Tyler could feel a terrible sinking sensation in his chest as he made his way over, his blood boiling at how uncomfortable she looked.
abby may have my giggle but tyler has something of his fathers... and that fucker better get his paws off. why are all these peeps hitting on my kids?!?! GOD!

Oh I’m sorry, is this your main tug or something?” He asks, cocking an eyebrow.
FJDAHSJFNDAOJFNAEWOL!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH! YOU KNOW WHY THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD!

“No, you listen, shit head.” TJ growled as he stepped in, positioning himself in front of his kids as Tyler held his baby sister in his arms behind his father.
PAPA BEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 RAWR!

“I know you’re not bothering my thirteen year-old daughter,” He paused to get right up in the stranger’s face, his eyebrows set in a menacing expression. “And I definitely know you’re not touching her.” He growled.
hahahah! oh snap! oh snap! TJ IS PISSED! like.. whoa crazy, someone is going after my baby girl pissed.

“That is one nice piece –“
what a fucking idiot.

“If you don’t stay away from my family, I’ll make sure you end up on Dateline as just another kid who goes missing on spring break, got it?” He hissed venomously
OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHMYGOD! OHMYGOD! BEST THING EVER! fbdaijnfaklfmda! holy FUCK!!!!!!! EEEEEKKKKK!!!!!!

She had a hard time breathing as she reached for Nate who tugged his shirt over his head.
ohmygod. not happy.

“Timothy Junior they are not old enough to be making decisions like this!” Brianna spat at her husband who, if possible, would have his head hanging low and his tail between his legs.
oh DEFINITELY. you just sit in your corner and keep your mouth shut while I yell.

“Baby, you’re fifteen, you don’t know what you want.” Brianna frowned to see that her baby’s skin was already altered for life. “Your Dad is much more persuasive than any one person should be.”
and TRUST ME, you are PRODUCTS of your father being a manipulative pain in the ass.

“I don’t want to talk about it, TJ. I just want to be mad right now.” Brianna said, kissing his cheek softly.
AMEN. just shut up teej. just SHHHHHHH. for once.

“Tell me what’s wrong, Ab, you never keep secrets from me.” He said quietly, feeling his heartbreak as she affirmed that.
I think my heart is going to burst from my chest. sooooooo cute <3

“Oh God, Abby.” TJ felt a lump forming in the back of his throat. “Baby… I’m so sorry I scared you.” His heart dropped into his stomach as he wrapped his arms around his daughter’s shoulders, holding her tenderly as tears trailed down her precious cheeks. “I didn’t mean to scare you, Abby.” He exhaled, “I just needed to protect you from that man, and when you’re a parent, especially to such a perfect child like you, you don’t want any harm to come to one of your kids, ever.”
OHMYGOD! OHMYGOD! OHMYGOD!!!! TEEEJ! IM NOT MAD AT YOU ANYMORE. I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 OH MY GOD. OHMYGOD. FAVORITE THING EVER. SO PRECIOUS.. SOO INCREDIBLE!

“You’re right, she must be tired.” TJ added under his breath
bad idea. i can hear everything, i am a mother TJ.

“I get all this crap for having Kelsey in my room to watch TV and no one says shit when Nate has sex with Ana!” He spat, making Nate’s eyes pop from his skull and the rest of the family gasp.
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NATE!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE THE GOOD BOY! THE ONE WHO FOLLOWS HIS BIG BROTHER WHEN HE GETS A TATTOO!!!!!!! YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE THE OTHER OSHIE BOYS! YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BREAK THE CURSE!!!!!!!! *WAILS!*

refusing to look at his father who had a horribly goofy grin on his face.
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU GRINNING ABOUT! BE A PARENT TJ!

“I’m not even going to justify that with a response.”
don't even try... he's an idiot!

He’d never let Abby have sex at fifteen, clearly Bergie wasn’t keeping a close enough eye on Ana. Not like he was on Abby. Right?
oh no... ohhhhh no.. i hope things don't get worse from here...

OHMYFUCKINGGOD!
BEST CHAPTER OF MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS WAS SO FUCKING AMAZING AND KICK ASS KARA!
GHUAIJNFOAJNFEAKWMFPKAMSEF!!!!!!!!!!!
i swear to god my oshie boys are taking a turn for the worse!
ohmygod. ohmygod. I don't even know what to say about nate.. my NATE! NATE! it's supposed to be TYLER, who is JUST like his FATHER.
ohdearlordjesus.
i am trying to catch my breath after that one.
that was so fucking awesome ohmygod. ohmygod.
it had SO much DRAMA and so much cuteness with teej and abbie..
and so much of teej being a friend to the boys instead of a parent.. that will always be a problem for him. but i love how he makes sure those boys respect his momma. DAMN RIGHT. except NATE should RESPECT ANA too!
ohmydearlord. MY NATE! MY LITTLE NATE! *WAILS!*
i'll just go die now. i want to know whats gonna happen in the aftermath.. am i gonna die from a heart attack.. because.. this trip.. is.. starting.. to be a bad idea.
ohmygod i need more. fniuahfiokeanfijnalk!!!!!!!!MORE!

I'm not even sure where to start with this comment.
Love the humor that the Oshie clan has together.
Think it's cute that TJ wants to adopt since he's not ready to give up being a daddy for little ones.
But, seriously can't believe they still had their way with each other even with Abby a few feet away. Guess TJ was right, she sleeps like a rock.
In fact, TJ and his sons looked so much alike that if TJ said he had crawled on top of himself and gotten pregnant, people would very well believe it.
That line really did make me laugh but, I guess they're right when they say like father like son(s).
Guess Oshie boys/ men have game. Ahaha
Great update!

Aww, adoption.
It's precious how much TJ loves being a daddy.
And he's such a good one.
But LMAO at the end.
TJ should know his boys got that gene.
More soon. <3

i love that they're gonna adopt, and i couldn't stop laughing at the end!!!!

Brianna asked innocently enough, but when TJ turned to face his wife, his thoughts were anything but innocent at the view of her in her small panties and white tee thin enough that he could see her breasts perfectly.
hehehehehehe. commmeeee hereee teeeej :D ;D

“Please, please baby.” He groaned, his hips thrusting up into hers with much more gusto and his hands kneading at her ample backside.
okay! okay! okay! Abby will be fine! OKAY! TAKE ME TJ! :D :D :D whoa hey slut... ;D

“Fine, but you can’t be loud.” She giggled before he could flip her down onto her back.“Right, because it would totally be me being the loud one.”
hahahahahahhahhahahhaha! RIGHT!

He grinned, kissing and teasing a portion of flesh on her breast to leave a territorial mark that would be just barely visible from the band of her bikini later in the vacation.
ohgawd. does he ALWAYS have an agenda?? oh wait. yeah.

“Brianna?” He asked cautiously, knowing she would still be lightheaded from her orgasm, just as his vision was slightly off.
tj oshie.. you are a PAIN IN MY ASS. I gave you THREE kids, COUNT THEM. THREE!

I just… I’m not ready to be done being a Dad.” He confessed quietly, feeling strangely vulnerable,
ohh baby.. you'll never be done being daddy to them :(

When he reached Nate and Tyler’s room, he knocked swiftly a few times, surprised to see a young girl opening the door.
WHAT! TJ SAY WHAT!?!?!?!!?!?!!? A GIRL!? IN MY BOY'S ROOM! whoa. don't make mama osh come kick some ass.

“Sup.” TJ grinned, raising his eyebrows at his son who knew he had been caught. “So… wanna explain the girl sneaking out of your room at almost two in the morning?” He asked, sitting down in the recliner in the corner that was tilted to face the two beds.
yeah tyler! tell daddy the story.. :p cause he's much nice than how mama would feel about that!

“You know that if it was your mother sitting here right now and not me she’d be throwing a goddamn fit, right?” He asked amusedly.
i wouldn't be sitting. I'd go for nate first, make him tattle on his older brother and then tyler would get it good.

“I’m not saying that, but I also had free range to do whatever I wanted, your Grandparents had zero control over me and I was a little shithead.” He pointed out. “Your mother and I raised you to be better than that.” He finished.
oh! ood job teej! yeah, go for the guilt.

And even though he knew his wife would have an absolute coronary if she found out about Kelsey that night, he couldn’t help that tiny, familiar smirk from forming on his lips as he walked back to his room.

The Oshie men had game.
TJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD! I WANT TO SMACK YOU! YOU JUST FOUND A GIRL SNEAKING OUT OF OUR SON'S ROOM AND ALL YOU CAN THINK ABOUT IS HOW THE OSHIE MEN HAVE GAME!?!?!?!?! OH MY GOD. *throws self dramatically on bed* no more sex for you.

just so you know, I hope I find out about that. I would be in HEAVEN with my reaction. and TJ, oh gawd. I mean, he did handle it well in the sense that they got the point that they needed to keep it in their pants, BUT STILL.
I mean, what if that was abby sneaking out of a guy's room??? THAT would sure as hell NOT be okay.
Rolll! anyways, this was so so so so so so awesome! I LOVED it and I love the Oshie family so much. seriously, watching TJ be a dad is super cute :D
and those kids, are just, ADORABLE when they are being good and listening to their parents. no more girls!
seriously, LOVE this. addicted. now im gonna work on jmill!
OHH SO CUTE!
<333333333

Loved the update.
Adopting? YEAH!!!! Maybe he'll ease up on his daughter if they have a baby.
I love how easily he convinced her though.
Oh those boys. But Hey compared to some kids (TJ included) they were Angels. And I'm not surprised TJ's proud of them. That's what makes him Teej right?
I can't wait till Brianna meets Kelsey. I think it will be fun to see if she likes her or if she has trouble dealing with her.
Looking forward to more. Soon Please... Oh and Jordan too, K?

: D

The Oshie men had game.

uh huh, I agree. Oshie men have game, indeed! hehe
sneaky little shits! and only TJ would get a smirk out of something like that, I swear to God!

Awww yay for adopting! Tj really is an amazing father! And yes they do not need any grandkids before they are married and graduated

Awww yay for adopting! Tj really is an amazing father! And yes they do not need any grandkids before they are married and graduated

Ahhhhhh, I love this!
First, I love Tyler & Nate.
They are just like their father, being all protective of their women.
It's adorable.
And it seems like Abbie is a daddy's girl which is perfect.
Basically, I love this.
More soon. <3

SORRY!!!!! I was supposed to comment last night. I am an EPIC fail. I actually fell asleep and now dealing with all the drama again...I seriously can't take it

I was sooooo glad that I got a notification saying that a sequel had been posted to the original story! I love stuff that leaps into the future and I love reading these guys with their kids. TJ's sure come a long way since his days at NoDak (got it right that time! I didn't realize that making a mistake and putting in an extra letter -NorDak was how their college radio station wrote it on line, so that's where I got it from- was the end of the freaking world!) and its really nice to see him as a dad and a husband!

Looking forward to more!

YAY For the sequel. Not enough TJ Oshie in the world.
Wow he sure has trouble dealing with his 13 year old daughter. Love to see how protective he is with her though, very sweet. Something tells me she's not going to be Ok with that for long though.
So now I wonder what the next phase of their relationship could be.
Does he want more babies? He wants to hire a bodyguard to keep an eye out for his daughter? Don't keep us waiting K?

This is nice to read the sequel and to find out how TJ and Brianna's marriage has been.
Nice to read about the kids, all grown up! The Oshie family sounds like they'd be a fun clan to be around. Great update!

i absoltley love this story...overprotective osh is completley hot...even though he has that nasty hair rite now...and he might be a little old in the story..lol...great update and i hope u post soon!!!

ahh. this just made me so happy. I'm happy you decided to do a sequel ! (:
TJ and Brianna are so cute together. I think you should update again REAL soon (:

I loved your first one and when I saw this I was all giddy. I can't wait for more.