the title of the chapter was perfect :) and Tre's last line was amazing. does Sophia actually understand any of the sexual jokes though? 'cause if she doesn't it would be sooo funny if you made a chapter of them explaining it all to her XD
i don't think the progression is too fast. everything is new to her. sort of like a first crush or your first boyfriend. you think you're in love, but you're not. and Billie Joe saved her from being lonely and unhappy. if someone did that for me, especially someone as sexy as Billie Joe, i'd feel the same haha.
“My new friend has never had PEPSI?!” I realized my strangler must be Tré, as Armstrong and Mike were standing off to different sides of me. “Oh, my poor baby!” he cried dramatically, stroking my hair. “What are they doing to you?”
Lmfao! That was my favorite part! I'm subscribed! I can't wait for more!!!
The parents are horrible. It's really awesome how you can tell so much about her without having to write weird, misplaced flashbacks or things like that. (: