Ten Things I Hate - Comments

I wish you would continue this story :(

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE PAT BBY AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Update asap? :3

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I love Pat.
I love this stoooory! <3

this is an amazing story. i love the emotional build up.

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I am so giddy right now. They kissed! Can I say, "Finally!" They finally released all that sexual frustration. Christ... So in love with this story.

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I had never been awkward with Pat, just moody and generally bitchy. And now he had me from hating him, to admitting we weren’t so different, to being unable to get him out of my head and now to being tongue tied around him.

This was absolutely cute. It made me laugh 'cause she was just on this roller coaster for a while.

And small typo here:

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“Yeah, I ran out of credit.” Pat tutted jokingly.

I think it was supposed to be Sophia. :)

this is cute.
i loved it.
update soon I wanna know what happens. :D

This story is really interesting.
You don't usually see too many p.kirch stories.
Update soon I wanna fond out how they deal after the makeout.
I subscribed(:

What?...I'm confused.
What does she mean things would be different???

Sara_Gates

Okay, so this last chapter has become my favorite. Pat being cryptic and mysterious, and Ray and G's scheming--Oh, my God, so good. My heart was melting when he sent her those texts; I thought it was extremely adorable. :) You're fab.

Oh, shnap! Someone's got a crushin' on a certain rat-boyyyyyy. :)

I am obsessed with this story! :D
Update plz.

Sara_Gates

DUDE. amazing! update soon please. :)

I'm quite partial to your writing style. It's lovely. I think the way the story progresses; it's smooth and you learn something new each time. It really draws the reader in. Loved it, as usual. :)

I really liked this chapter. It wasn't as comical or anything, but it might be my favorite so far because Pat and Sophia have in a way reached a stepping stone in their relationship. I'm glad that she's realized how awful she's been to Pat. Now, it's just time for them to get their groove on and start macking! haha.

This chapter made me slightly depressed.
But it's cute, in it's own weird way.
Or maybe that's just me imagining things :D

oOOoooOOOohhhh!!! Love it!

Personally, I would choose Kennedy, but that's just me, and it's a Pat story--gotta remind myself that. Hahaha.

amazing ^_^

cant wait fr more

amazing ^_^

cant wait fr more

This is a really great idea :)
Can't wait for more!