God Knows You're on My Mind. - Comments

  • Sore Winner

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    awwwwh :D
    i love the whole seret admirer storyline, abut tbf, im Team Marcus, cos everyone loves a bad boy ;)
    i dno, Derek seems a little too eager to please, and Johnny is too shy :D
    Team Marcus then :P x
    April 24th, 2010 at 11:54pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Oh crap. Johnny likes her too now........ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! Love it ;) :) :) :D :D :D: P :P :P
    April 22nd, 2010 at 02:11am
  • xoxomusic363

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    I don't like it.........I love it!!!!!!!!! :) :D :P Haha probably saw that one coming didn't you??? :D :P :)

    Derek and Pip are just adorable together. Haha they love each other's walls......I think we all know what that really means ;) haha Love it, love it, love it. :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 29th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Awwwwwww!!!!!! Derek is a sweetheart!!!!!! He said making love instead of the other!!! How cute!!!!!!! & poor Jonny :( Love this story :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 26th, 2010 at 05:03am
  • xoxomusic363

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    So I just found this story, and I love it. It's very well written and I love the plotline :)

    Poor Jonny :( And what is wit her freaking mom??? She's a butt.

    Love the story already!!! And I want more of it too!!! So keep on writing :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 21st, 2010 at 05:35am
  • Chocomaro

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    Haven't read yet, just the summary and the characters, and I must say, Piper is one luck biznitch.
    XD
    More comments from me tomorrow, yo.
    March 16th, 2010 at 07:03am
  • noro

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    ;3
    March 11th, 2010 at 04:36am
  • K_atie.

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    You want comments like I want your chapters <3
    March 10th, 2010 at 07:53am
  • ruledbysecrecy

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    Subscribed.
    I like it a lot, though I'm only halfway through chapter two. I will give more feedback tomorrow but you really have a nice way of writing, original expressions, and I like your imagery and use of onomatopoeia.
    March 9th, 2010 at 04:01am
  • noro

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    Iforgottoput [/ size]

    ashd

    anyway
    yeah
    night readers/subscribers
    March 8th, 2010 at 07:06am
  • noro

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    Well, nevermind if it's a 'privacy' issue or whatever
    /Justreadthatonethread

    anyway
    ;c
    sadface.

    I'mma head off to bed. I might update both stories tomorrow- it depends on how much homework I have.

    ILGUYSKAYBYE<3
    March 8th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • noro

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    Feel free to comment this and tell me if you subscribed or not.

    ('cause I really wanna know who subscribed <<)
    :D
    March 8th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • Perfume

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    I like this. And that whole 'girl likes three guys' plot. Definitely keeps things entertaining! Good job.
    March 8th, 2010 at 05:02am