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  • bullets are hailing.

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    You know, the other day, I decided to watch Titanic. So when I was watching it, your story was all on my mind. The funny thing was that whenever the characters said "Jack" and "Rose" All I could hear was the names Gerard and Anne! I mean really, this story is so amazing!
    December 2nd, 2007 at 02:03pm
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    I will update soon! I promise...I'm just having a bit of writers block. ._.
    December 1st, 2007 at 10:58am
  • shootmenow

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    -twitch- I'm like a caffein addict who hasn't had a coffee in dayssss. You need to update soon. I need to know what's going to happen. I need this story. And now I need a coffee :shock:
    November 29th, 2007 at 11:29pm
  • bullets are hailing.

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    I just simply love this story! when I read the chapters, I could just feel the character's emotions! This is so amazing and I'm starting to love it better than the movie!
    November 26th, 2007 at 08:50am
  • Bad Luck.

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    :D

    I love commenting on your stories so much.

    Gahhh. I just love it.

    I will be stalking this story until there is an update, lol. :XD
    November 26th, 2007 at 06:14am
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    gah...omg. sdasahsa *screams* Swoon That just toally flatters me. Thinking about my story? Thinking about in class. I'm glad you didn't get in trouble! if you did you could have said it was my fault. :con:

    but gez, thank you so much Alexa. In Love Means a whole lot to me. I promise I will have something within a few days, I'm just a bit stuck and yeah.

    *daydreams* best comments ever. In Love
    November 25th, 2007 at 12:13pm
  • Bad Luck.

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    So, there is no new chapter or anything, but I just felt like commenting anyways. Because I love this story to death, one of my [surprisingly, very few] favorites on here.

    -hugs story to death-

    The other day, I was really thinking about this story during my Geography class, and I was just like, "Awww Gerard and Anne," under my breath. I was smiling all silly and whatnot, and then my teacher calls on me.

    I was all like :| , "3.7%?"

    My brain was just screaming at me to yell, "THEY KISSED! THEY KISSED OHMYGOD PEOPLE, BE HAPPY THAT THEY KISSED!"

    But I didn't, thank god. The teacher would've gotten mad at me anyways because I didn't plan to scream it in French, or whatever. Geography sucks.

    Anyways, I got in trouble for that class, but daydreaming was totally worth it.
    November 25th, 2007 at 11:33am
  • chrissie.

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    Gosh. I just spend an hour reading all this. It was simply amazing.
    So, so amazing.
    I love how you describe stuff, too.
    Wayy better than the origonal Titanic story. =]
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:47pm
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    Thanks so much for reading guys! I'm glad that you take the time to read and comment.

    I won't be updating this for a few days...I just had another idea for a story and I want to start it. Also, I haven't been on all too much. But I will continue this story! Just in a few days.

    Thanks again. :D
    November 22nd, 2007 at 12:37pm
  • Gerardopoly

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    Aww they kissed and Anne said that she would tell Clate no.
    This story is just so adorable and well written.
    You describe every single detail which shows that you have pride in your work.
    Can't wait for more. In Love
    November 20th, 2007 at 05:54am
  • ELEMENTAIRE;

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    This part had me crying .. I'm still a little blinded.
    Fuck. The melody and the story goes perfect together.

    I just .. I just love it. I love your writing. This .. Could be thee greatest story I've ever read.

    xoxo
    Cora.
    November 20th, 2007 at 03:13am
  • VilliamLaura

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    finally! i loved the chapter. it was really well written. u should continue writing! it was so amazing! im so glad they kissed. i knew it was coming, but i barely expected it here, and it went to well
    November 19th, 2007 at 05:11am
  • Your Mom

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    Finally they kissed. Smiley
    I was grinning like a madman when she dropped the ring into the sea's water.
    My face hurts from that, now. :P
    Update whenever you can. (:
    November 19th, 2007 at 04:39am
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    shootmenow:
    So yesterday I managed to go through my entire closet of old vhs's and found the movie (I really have to buy the dvd. It kept jumping and stuff Disgust)! I watched it, and I had honestly forgot how amazing it was. I pictured Anne and Gerard there instead of Rose and Jack, and I was crying sooo hard at the end.
    The movie is perfect, and this story is even better than the movie!

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    oh wow....*is in shock* that is...wow....

    I don't think it's even close to being anything like the movie...but hearing it...wowo...

    thank you so freaking much. Swoon

    i'm in shock. thankyuothakntoyu!!!!!!
    November 18th, 2007 at 08:10pm
  • shootmenow

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    So yesterday I managed to go through my entire closet of old vhs's and found the movie (I really have to buy the dvd. It kept jumping and stuff Disgust)! I watched it, and I had honestly forgot how amazing it was. I pictured Anne and Gerard there instead of Rose and Jack, and I was crying sooo hard at the end.
    The movie is perfect, and this story is even better than the movie!

    Clap
    November 18th, 2007 at 07:41pm
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    Swoon Thank you guys!!!!1

    Alexa- I always love reading your reviews, they make me go all In Love I did make a type with the little girl scene, I said news instead of knees. :lol: It was 5 am when I wrote it. I hate when people write and they just kissed. ._. that's why I ramble on. haha thank you!

    shootmenow- Swoonaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!1 thank you!!111 I'm glad you like the music. I love it, I write while listening to it. I'm so glad you read it.

    Melvyn. Smiley- :o thank you!!1 I'm no where the most talented writer on this site, but thank you...I've gone all red.

    thank you to everyone that reads and comments and oh my. Swoon

    Sorry about the typos and the crapiness of the plot, I'm letting myself slip with editing and so on, I just hate reading what I write... ._.

    I'll be updating soon, thank you!!!!!!!!!
    November 18th, 2007 at 02:41pm
  • Dr. Death Defying

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    Beautiful.
    November 18th, 2007 at 08:40am
  • dreamboat.

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    kayso, im a new reader, yah? yeah.

    and you have to be one of the most talented writers on this site.

    I love this story to bits and pieces, and it helps that i love the movie
    aha.

    :]
    update soon,

    gldanlgkad gda

    gdalnglda
    i positively cannot wait
    aha.

    : DDD

    Smiley
    November 18th, 2007 at 08:08am
  • xlovestruckx

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    omfg
    awesome story

    update sooon
    xoxo
    November 18th, 2007 at 04:06am
  • shootmenow

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    ^What she said!
    Your description of everything is so amazingly well, it really makes you feel like you're one of the passengers on the titanic, like, standing and watching this couple from a distance. It's just wonderful, I don't know how to say it any other way...
    Also, I don't know if I've said it before but the music is great having there! It really helps, and I got chills when I read the kissing scene 'cause that's when the music really kicked in!
    I'm really looking forward to an update!
    November 18th, 2007 at 02:49am