November 11th, 2007 at 11:27am
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Now Gerard has no money. Just because Anne wouldn't believe him. You wanna know what I fucking think of that?! I think that's brilliant. Gerard tossing out all the money he had was totally unexpected; I mean that in a good way, though. [:November 11th, 2007 at 11:05am
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Gahhhh. You amaze me with every chapter you write. Seriously.
"But I-"
"-You will have no opinion in the matter Anne." She glared. "Stop thinking of yourself and think about the future of this family." Her forked tongue was showing all sides of her. She began to walk away as if the matter was of no importance.
I love how Anne's not even thinking of herself yet her mother accuses her of doing so. Kind of dawned on something personal with me... Anyways. That part was greatly written.
And that whole last part with Gerard and Anne? Wonderful. I love how he's throwing away all his money just to prove he's telling the truth. So he doesn't have any money anymore? I'm kind of worried for him. But it's just how the conversation isn't forced like it is with Mr. Clate, and how Anne actually just talks to Gerard.
And noooo, Anne can't marry Mr. Clate! I mean, gahh he is such an asshole. She shouldn't marry him. I hate him. Of course I think everybody hates him.
): I couldn't listen to the music this time because I'm not at my house. I miss it with the music. I'll probably re-read it later with the music and find the chapter way more amazing.
Anyways, I just really love all the emotion in this story. And also, I can't believe Anne's mother.
I guess it's just hard to realize how much the times have changed. I'm so glad that today we don't have to wear corsets and dresses and don't have to marry early.
But I just really, really love that for the 10-20 minutes I'm reading every chapter, you're taking me back into the 1900's and onto the Titanic.
And of course I can't wait for more.November 11th, 2007 at 08:27am -
Omg! I love this story! It's so beautiful. I love it. Can't wait for more!November 11th, 2007 at 07:40am
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please update soon!November 11th, 2007 at 06:25am
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THANK YOU!
I really had no idea anyone would read this. ._. THANK YOU! Having someone read my stuff makes it all the more better. :mrgreen:November 11th, 2007 at 03:46am -
You know, I'm really into the story. - And the plot.
Please, please keep on writing.
You rock.November 11th, 2007 at 03:39am -
I hope to achieve my goal of making readers feel as though they actually are the character and feel the emotions as if you are watching the film.
You've succeeded.
I've only read to chapter three because I really have to go, but I'm pretty sure chapter four is just as amazing and well written as the others. You're describing everything so well; you're like throwing the reader into the world of 1912.November 11th, 2007 at 03:18am -
:omfg: Oh my, you've brightened my mood!!11 thank you.- Dork.:
- Shame on anyone who reads but doesn't comment this story!
Its...amazing. I love it all, especially since Titanic is one of my favorite movies of all time. I remember my siblings couldn't drag me away from the movie XD I was always so sad when it ended, knowing there wouldn't be any more. Boy, was this a burst of fresh air when I discovered this story!
Please, please, PLEASE continue. I'm loving every moment of it!
I love titanic too. :tehe: I will never stop loving it. :file:
Thank you... November 11th, 2007 at 02:30am -
Shame on anyone who reads but doesn't comment this story!
Its...amazing. I love it all, especially since Titanic is one of my favorite movies of all time. I remember my siblings couldn't drag me away from the movie XD I was always so sad when it ended, knowing there wouldn't be any more. Boy, was this a burst of fresh air when I discovered this story!
Please, please, PLEASE continue. I'm loving every moment of it!November 11th, 2007 at 02:26am -
omg, thank you!!!!!!!!!!111111111 November 9th, 2007 at 11:48am
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This is amazing.
I really, really loved Titantic, and I am such a sucker for the soundtrack music; this story was calling my name. I can tell this is going to be just as good as the movies was. You've written this story pretty well. I'm subscribing.November 9th, 2007 at 11:03am -
eeeeeekkk!!!!!!11THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!!!111
Alexa, I loved your comment. :tehe: Thank you so much. :mrgreen:
I'll update soon. :DNovember 9th, 2007 at 10:04am -
Eeeekkkk. I loved the update.
I don't like Mr. C [I forgot his real name..XP]..he's an ass XDNovember 9th, 2007 at 08:05am -
So I had to tear myself away from the story page-- and the beautiful music-- to comment.
By the way, I've never tried to read a story with music in the background, because I've always thought it would distract me. But this time, I tried it and I thought the piano music just enhanced the whole thing.
"Do you normally start conversations about such things with every women you have met? And without an introduction, I must add." I looked at him poised, despising myself even more for doing so. He smiled and laughed.
"Why do I have to?" His childish gaze brought me to loosen the tension building up inside of every muscle I had. I didn't want to forget that this shouldn't be.
"I'm not quiet sure, Mr..." I paused, waiting for him to fill in and realize. "Mr?" I waited, hiding the grin I felt so willing to do.
"Okay, you got me. Way." He knew that I couldn't bring myself to shut him down with cruel and meaningless words.
^^ That part of the story, I found really cute. I don't know, but it was just his playful aura about him.
And :tehe: it just makes me giggle lots.
I can't wait for more updates, I really love your concept!
And, if there was any song I secretly loved to cry to, it would be that Titanic song [[I forget what it's called]].
But anyways.
Can't wait for moreeeee! :tehe:November 9th, 2007 at 04:07am -
Fantastic!
xoxoNovember 9th, 2007 at 12:06am -
this is such a great story! keep updating!November 8th, 2007 at 11:27pm
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Okay, I finally got to reading it. And might I say, it was certainly worth it.
I love love love how you practically whisked me back to the early 1900's. I love how you described how she acted, and how she had to act, and how she hated to act like that.
And I love how you already made me hate Mr. Clate. Jeeeeeeeesus, you have me dying to know who this man is! Even though I alreayd know >_> -nudge-
I loved this idea, and well, I almost had an idea like it. But I know now, that I wouldn't have had the proper amount of elegance in my writing to do it like you did.
This is great, I have to subscribe, and I'm wanting more of the story already. Your writing always gets me hooked.November 8th, 2007 at 05:44am -
Amazing!November 8th, 2007 at 12:45am
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OMFG. I think I'm in love. XD
You're a wonderful, but you sorta used the homophones for certain words so it kinda looked.....unusual. I still loved it though; quite unique. ^__^November 7th, 2007 at 01:21pm
THANK YOU!!!111
I wasn't as satisfied with this chapter, I rushed into it. I kinda love the idea of him throwing money over :shifty but I kinda have write a lot before I get to the scenes with Gerard because he's not as important now, I wrote so much before that seen I guess I started rushing into it and it was 5 am and gah. I kinda hate repeating myself with lines like 'she looked into his eyes' :roll: I'll try and mix it up the next chapter and make it perfect. :D
Sorry if there's more expected with the scenes with Gerard, it's just I have to make everything longer because the story is based over just 2 days. :cheese: So instead of make about 7quick scenes with him, I'll write one long one. :D
Thanks again guys, you reading it makes me extremely happy but comments
Thank you Alexa again, your comment is just
And Killer;;Mokeh, I thought you were gonna say you hated Anne for making Gerard do what he said. I was all :mrgreen: when I read the rest of the comment.
I'll stop talking out my excitement now. THANKANUYOUTHANKTYOU!!1