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Amazing. You're a really, really good writer. More soon?November 18th, 2009 at 01:42am
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No updates?
Please don't quit on us. :'(November 29th, 2008 at 11:16pm -
I love this story!!
It's amazing :]January 27th, 2008 at 04:13am -
You should update, like, really, really soon.
:shifty
:mrgreen:
'cause I love this story.January 26th, 2008 at 03:45am -
^ Oops. Hope I didn't cause you not to continue.
However, this is a really good interpretation of the story line.
I'm writing a Titanic story too. Based of of the video game Titanic: Adventure Out of TimeJanuary 14th, 2008 at 10:45pm -
Ehh. idk if I'll ever continue this. Someone said it was cheesy how it was a fanfic and I kinda realized the story's horrible. It'll take some energy for me to pick up where I left off.
I might continue sooner or later. Motivation is the key!January 14th, 2008 at 05:57pm -
OMG.
why haven't I found this story before?!?!?!? :shock:
it's SO fantastic!!!!!!
:D :mrgreen:
YAY another Titanic story to read.... I'm in love
Update soon or I'll come and eat your Skittles.January 14th, 2008 at 05:15pm -
Woah. This was amazing. It would be a bit better if it weren't a fan-fiction (it made it a bit cheesy.0 but otherwise it's great!December 11th, 2007 at 07:13am
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I'm thinking about what the ending should be...idk yet.- bullets_are_hailing:
- i...i think i just shed a tear. that last update was sad.
will she be with Gerard at the end?
Ah, sorry for not updating...I have the ol' writer's block.December 10th, 2007 at 08:00am -
i...i think i just shed a tear. that last update was sad.
will she be with Gerard at the end?December 10th, 2007 at 04:57am -
Your=love.
It's my girlfriend.
;)December 9th, 2007 at 12:09am -
This story, in an unusual way, reminds me of a book based on the Titanic from the Dear America series. I just thought I'd state that.
Mr. Clate and Anne's mother are cruel, money coated arses. I nearly stabbed my computer screen with part of a cookie [/insert my complete stupidity here].
Lala.
December 5th, 2007 at 01:46pm -
I haven't yet decided if it should be a sad or happy ending. ._.- Grief.:
- This is sad. They should be together.
Is it going to be like in the movie?
December 4th, 2007 at 06:28pm -
This is sad. They should be together.
Is it going to be like in the movie?December 4th, 2007 at 06:11pm -
Aw, Alexa. She's actually nineteen. lol I think I was trying to say that before he granddaught was 17 she had kissed heaps of guys...and when anne was 19 she only had one kiss and was engaged. I kinda confuse things. :cheese: I'll straighten it out in the next chapter. Thank you so much for that comment. you seriously rock. \m/
:swoon: and thank you for joining my crappy site! ahaha I might post this on there to get people to join if they read it. Anyone here can do that if they like. :D
I (L) you guys for reading and commenting and oh my
And, shootmenow...haha The chapter wasn't as great and ahhaa I smiled when you said 'you couldn't write a crap chapter if you tried' oh my and I'm sorry fr making you love the movie, I haven't seen it for so long! I'm just afraid that if I watch it now, how I write the characters will become too much like Jack and Rose.
I guess I didn't update for so long because I was watching and reading Anne of Green Gables. ._. And I'm in love with that and gosh, it disturbed my train of though for this story. But, I did get a bit more of a gist on how people acted in the early 1900's. Then I saw mcr live on friday and the Gerard in my head was mixed up with the real Gerard and I kinda got stuck on what to think. That's why I didn't write much on Gerard for this chapter.
Anyway, I'm going on. :x THANK YOU, ALEXA! THANK YOU GUYS!!!!11
I will have something new up soon. :DDecember 4th, 2007 at 12:26pm -
Awww. That is so sad!December 4th, 2007 at 06:41am
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Oh please, you could not write a bad chapter if you tried :roll:
It was amazing, as usual. Your writing is really unique. I love it!
Oh, and btw. Thanks to you, I am now addicted to a certain movie
I've lost count of how many times I've seen it lately.
It still can't compare to this story though. December 4th, 2007 at 03:23am -
Yay! An update!
Anyways.
"It's hard to believe that was the very first time I had kissed a man," I said, still lingering inside the memory. My eyes wandered over to my Granddaughter, who was the same age I was when I had first met him. Her eyes darted as I looked at her. I knew she must have kissed a thousand young men before she turned seventeen; back then, it was impossible to find a young man and women who had kissed before they got married.
Eeeee! Anne is seventeen? Actually... I should have been paying ore attention... but anyways. That's pretty young to be getting married O_O
But yay Gerard is her first kiss! That's pretty sweet. (:
"He did not attack me, he merely pointed out...a bug...that was crawling on my cheek, he brushed it off before it had the chance to bite me," I said the first lie that came to my mind. I looked over to Gerard, who was hiding a smile.
"Is this true?" My Mother asked, looking back at Gerard.
"Yes," I answered. "It was one of those terrible bugs, that bite you and make your skin itchy, a, ah...a-"
"-It was a mosquito," Gerard added.
"A mosquito? In the middle of the ocean?" Mr Clate questioned.
"Well, you know third class people, they bring everything with them," Gerard answered.
:tehe: What an excuse. Tht was really cute, though. I tink everyone was overreacting just a little... plus Mr. Clate's an asshole. Blehhh. Poop on his head.
That was a very pretty poem, by the way (: Very very very very pretty.
"The ring," he almost spat. He turned to the table and to the empty box; the ring wasn't there. That hope quickly ran and was filled with sudden fear. "Where is the ring?!" he spat, snatching the empty box.
"Oh, it slipped as Mr. Way was...'attacking'...me," I said, hiding the twisted grin I wanted show so much.
"You're lying, where is the ring!?" his hot breathe ran down my neck.
"Its gone." His face was glowing red and I was growing with more and more fear.
"That ring is worth more than your body weight in gold!" he spat once again. "Where is it?! Tell me!" he demanded.
"I told you, its gone."
Haha. I laughed at that part, Mr. Clate's an ass, Anne's really cool. Lol. She pwned him. HAH! (:
Ughhhhhh... she can't get married to him! I wanna choke that Clate... -evil glare- Ahhh well.
This update made my day (: Yay for updates! I love this story.
Edit// This chapter was not crappy! It was very beautifully written. (:December 4th, 2007 at 01:33am -
sorry for the crappiness of this chapter, guys! :oops:December 4th, 2007 at 01:18am
