This Modern Love - Comments

Awwh, that was cuuuuute.
I really hope Candace ends up making the right choice.
I'd pick Scotty, but that's just me.
:D

Yes! I love Saturdays where I skip on everything because I'm just too damn tired to move a muscle because now I finally caught up on your whole story and have time to comment!
WOOHOO!
Anyway, Scotty makes me laugh. He can be so adorable sometimes! I feel sorry for him because he is such a pushover and tries so much for her, even though he knows she'll always love Shaun.
Shaun, oh my goodness, I feel like he's such a douche to her. If I could kick his butt I probably would, but it's fanFICTION!
LOL.
Update update update!
Love love love love! and peace.

i loved the update! i cant wait to see all the self battles shes going to go through to realize which guy is the one she wants!

i.....want her to love Scotty after this...

If she keeps remembering Shaun whenever she's with Scotty then obviously there's going to be internal conflict. She just needs to forget all about Shaun and focus on sexy Scotty :)

AHHHH CANDACEEEEEE STUPID GIRL!!!

this story is losing love because shaun is hardly in it anymore! please bring him back!

DUDE. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.
I've been saying "dude" a lot more now because of the Frends videos.
I really hope she goes through with it. Just because it's kind of... Scotty's been going through this even though he knows he's not getting her in the end. And he deserves something he wants, right? So let him have his moment.
The part where she drags him into the shower in his clothes make me think of the Cribs video. Where he stands in the shower and turns it on and then gets wet and acts surprised. xD
UPDATE. NOW.
Love you! (For whoring out my story and continuing to make this story loveable!)

I disagree and agree with dylsgirl, I think that might be a good idea, though its totally cliche. That shit always happens and then everything is perfect and everyones like "oh my god, now i realize what i have in front of me" Thats just stupid.
It actually happened. They had sex..unless your planning for something to happen next chapter that fucks this all up haha. Man dont yeah wish you could shower with Scotty?!? Candace i such a tease. Like came on his guys totally in love with you and hes nervous about having sex, when is a guy EVER nervous about that?! Though she is nervous too, but its pretty much for the wrong reasons, shes thinking about Shaun >.> Grrr..

You're defnitely not starting to fuck up this story, I love it :)

I think Shaun needs to drop in suprisingly somewhere where he isnt supposed to be. Or have something really horrible happen to Candace.. Like a car wreck or a guy beating her up or something. Just to spice things up a little bit.

Yeah! Go Team Scooty!

I don't want her and Scotty to do it, honestly.
I want something tragically good or bad to happen that makes them not do it.
Idk what, but I'd love to see them road trip it to Colorado for whatever crazy reason.
I just don't want them to do it!

OH MAN! i can't wait until the next chapter! lol

YOU'RE NOT FUCKING THE STORY UP AT ALL!!!
i just think the sex scene should be in there, not just skipped out like shaun's
haha XDXD

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Poor Louie got sick! I'm going to guess you either take Spanish or used an online translator. The way I say it is "Perdoname pero no es mi vomito." Basically its forgive me but it's not my vomit. I can only imagine Mason playing Dad. Damn, Candace wants to jump the gun already. I'm sure Scotty is loving this side of her. Love it!!!!!

SEE! This is what Candace's first time should be like. Special and put together. Scotty is going to make it romantic I can tell...thats unless Candace jumps on him before it all happen later haha.

I wish I could help you with sugestions. I through out some, but yeah I guess they were kinda lame haha. I don't really know wha tp do. Are you thinking about writing in someone else's pov. For Shaun's trip. You'd probley have more fun writing about the trip. Cause Louie and all them are their together, and your great with Louie, haha :P

i loved the update! I cant wait to see what happens during the rest of their beach trip! More soon!

I say...
PET STORE.
I will continue to suggest PET STORE until you put it in this story or your Scotty story. :)
You whored my stories in your Scotty one. You get lots of love!