I. Love. You. So. Fruking. Much. Yes, that word was misspelled on purpose.
And yes, I meant that. I love how many times you update and every fruking chapter. I love how realistic your characters are and how they interact with each other.
I agree completely with ArgonxRoses, please write more. Lol <3<3<3
Honestly Vaughn is perfect. And, I'm not talking perfect as in like 'oh man, he has no flaws, what a babe!' it's the fact that you created him with real flaws that makes him perfect. Like, honestly the way you capture his image in every habit he has or word that he speaks is astounding. I'm so envious of that ability you have, my god. And the way you created Alice is amazing, too. Like, she's real, you know? I love how she doesn't just succomb to his charm, but she's also not completely unaware of it. Ugh, I love these characters so much! I seriously would be the first one in the book store if this story were to become an actual novel.
“Alice likes me,” he smiled sloppily at a passer-by as he informed them of this downright lie. Love Vaughn! Why do I get the feeling Josh did something to her drink...or maybe that's just cause I don't trust him either
Hurray for updates! Lol. I checked my email and said "yay" then came here to read it xD And...the designated driver passed out. dun dun dunnnnnn <---dramatic music verbalized
Seriously though, I love it. And, I still want more. I'd cry if you lost inspiration for it randomly. So....with that said, more? xD xD xD
Don't even worry about it. I do that all the time. I go through phases with my stories and some are updated constantly, others are just updated when i have motivation for them.
He groaned in frustration before moving his other hand to press gently on his head. “Believe me when I say that you don’t. The morning after isn’t worth it, the disappointed look on everyone’s faces, the total memory loss of the entire night. We’re all running to forget something but this isn’t the way to do it.”
FAVOURITE.
honestly, i don't know why you're not a friggen author by now.