I've officially read chapter 1-6 and I'm sad because there's no more to read lol. Please update more soon. I know you updated yesterday, but stillllll. Lol <3
Yay, I'm so happy I found this story. Just read chapter one, and, yay for Alice and yay for Vaughn. [I had to copy and paste his name 'cuz it's spelled so hard lol]. Totally loving it after one chapter. Great writing skills <3
Oh my gosh this is a great story so far. The details are really vivid and the text flows nicely as well. THe dialogue between them makes me smile, basically its amazing. Keep wiriting please!
The writing is amazing. The characters are beautifully flawed and real. I think that this is one of my favorite stories of all. And we're only 6 chapters into it. : ] I wish there was a smiley that could express the amount of joy reading this story gives me.
I absolutely adore this story. I regret not reading it every other time I have seen it on the stories list. But I found that your writing style was unique and I think that's what kept me reading. I love how Alice just is little by little finding herself because of the cocky and mysterious Vaughn. I like the name Vaughn.
But really, the way you write is simply remarkable. It's beautiful. Keep writing.
Oh my God, the way you describe things i swear to you is amazing. Like, the whole broken aspect of her parents marriage and her beliefs on love - ugh, it's so good. And the way she's battling herself with Vaughn is just amazing. Like, seriously you should consider getting published. Your writing is too damn good.
Oh, and on a side note:
"How does it feel to be back here again with chewing gum stuck to your ass..."
true story. public transportation ALL throughout grade nine. It only took one day to sit down on a fresh wad of gum.
Each chapter just gets better and better. Like, honestly. I love how their dialogue is normal - like, it's not overdone, but it's real, ya know?
I really like how you've made Vaughn this untouchable soul that everyone wants to just break down. Like, just come right out and say what he's thinking, but he wont.