Stories from the Back of His Motorcycle - Comments

  • Kak0o8

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    Ahh I love it but please update other story I long to read
    March 24th, 2010 at 11:54pm
  • WhoStoleMyCookies

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    woot!!! more more more!!
    March 24th, 2010 at 11:41pm
  • DragonxFox

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    I've officially read chapter 1-6 and I'm sad because there's no more to read lol.
    Please update more soon. I know you updated yesterday, but stillllll. Lol <3
    March 23rd, 2010 at 01:39am
  • DragonxFox

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    Yay, I'm so happy I found this story. Just read chapter one, and, yay for Alice and yay for Vaughn.
    [I had to copy and paste his name 'cuz it's spelled so hard lol].
    Totally loving it after one chapter. Great writing skills <3
    March 23rd, 2010 at 12:25am
  • Dodger

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    Loved it :)
    March 22nd, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • Reckless

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    Ah-mazinggg! I'm addicted and I heart Vaughn already ;L
    March 22nd, 2010 at 08:21pm
  • broman13

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    Oh my gosh this is a great story so far. The details are really vivid and the text flows nicely as well. THe dialogue between them makes me smile, basically its amazing. Keep wiriting please!
    March 22nd, 2010 at 08:18pm
  • book-a-holic

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    absolutely awesome story...
    I was hooked from the start!!
    I love the dialogue and the characters.
    keep posting!!! :D
    March 22nd, 2010 at 11:57am
  • FaytheMichelle

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    Ugh, I fucking love this story !
    Update soon pleaseeeee <3
    March 22nd, 2010 at 10:58am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    loved the last couple updates!
    I'm glad she actually got on with him!
    cant wait for more!
    March 22nd, 2010 at 07:13am
  • ArgonXRoses

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    The writing is amazing. The characters are beautifully flawed and real. I think that this is one of my favorite stories of all. And we're only 6 chapters into it. : ] I wish there was a smiley that could express the amount of joy reading this story gives me.

    M o r e s o o n p l e a s e
    March 22nd, 2010 at 05:19am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved the chapter!
    yay she got on the motorcycle! lol
    more soon!
    March 22nd, 2010 at 04:29am
  • old man Jim

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    Adore the story.
    Love the name 'Vaughn'
    Cant wait to read the rest :]
    March 22nd, 2010 at 03:14am
  • he calls me darling.

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    I absolutely adore this story. I regret not reading it every other time I have seen it on the stories list. But I found that your writing style was unique and I think that's what kept me reading. I love how Alice just is little by little finding herself because of the cocky and mysterious Vaughn. I like the name Vaughn.

    But really, the way you write is simply remarkable.
    It's beautiful. Keep writing.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 12:44am
  • alexandra.

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    Oh my God, the way you describe things i swear to you is amazing. Like, the whole broken aspect of her parents marriage and her beliefs on love - ugh, it's so good.
    And the way she's battling herself with Vaughn is just amazing. Like, seriously you should consider getting published. Your writing is too damn good.

    Oh, and on a side note:

    "How does it feel to be back here again with chewing gum stuck to your ass..."

    true story. public transportation ALL throughout grade nine. It only took one day to sit down on a fresh wad of gum.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 12:15am
  • WhoStoleMyCookies

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    omg i luv it!!!!! update now please!!!!
    March 21st, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • thewolf.

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    I dig it a lot.
    March 21st, 2010 at 10:58pm
  • alexandra.

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    Each chapter just gets better and better. Like, honestly. I love how their dialogue is normal - like, it's not overdone, but it's real, ya know?

    I really like how you've made Vaughn this untouchable soul that everyone wants to just break down. Like, just come right out and say what he's thinking, but he wont.

    Ugh, this is really amazing. I hate you, haha.
    <3
    March 19th, 2010 at 01:24am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    oh wow this story is so good!
    *subscribes*
    i love your writing style!
    more soon!
    March 19th, 2010 at 01:10am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I love this new story idea of yours. :D
    I can't wait to see what happens next.
    March 19th, 2010 at 01:03am