Ahhhh..awesome story dude! I just think that in ch. 30, Remy forgave Edward all too quickly, ya shoulda made him beg, and plead, but its friggin awesome. Love u story..keep updating...idk like, now would be nice lol =)
I really liked this chapter, although I feel the need to point out that vampires don't actually cry. At least in the books they don't, but thats just a minor thing. It was still really, really good (:
Now I adore the original Twilight books and movies but I'm not going to lie here, I really wouldn't mind seeing your version as a movie :). ... This is defiantly good!
Rock on! Remy and Edward 4EVER!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! (Idea: Bella has a kid in Breaking Dawn. I know Remy can't have a kid or anything, but you could maybe make them adopt if you wanted) lol.