yeah its just a short story though. it was in my head for a while and it wouldnt go away so i had to get it outLOL :) i might extend it someday but not rite now. i dont think im good enough a writer yet
June 8th, 2010 at 01:09am
I think that this story is pretty interesting. Cross is a cool name, and there's this part that leaves you wondering what she's going to do next (the peanut butter jar part). (:
On the other hand, I think that the layout is a little dark. Meh, that's just me.