Johnny the Homicidal Maniac - Comments

you HAVE to write a sequel!!! this story was way to good to NOT have one, so therefore you need to have one, cause johnny did ask a good question who is christ's new host? i loved this story and i'm sad to see it come to an end so soon

You better write a sequel I'll bug you if you don't!
It was an interesting way to finish the story and it left it open for a sequel so i demand one.

the thing that scares me the most about your story, is that it reminds me so much of my ex-boyfriend it's scary. He didn't kill people, but he did hear voices and see things. And it's just, scary.

it's a good story, very interesting. Maybe be a bit more clear on the details and try to stick with one POV at a time. but other than that, very good.

what....god damn that was um...damn!

Ahh more soon?

...holy hell jim kissed christ?! and now he is going to watch him rape someone...just...holy hell

WOW!!! yeah jim steping up and trying to get some...sweet, but not the smartest thing to do, i hope johnny doesn't kill anyone he knows

Jimmy coming onto Johnny made me laugh so hard. More soon?

i love this story a story in my mind can never go to fast unless you run out of idea's or notebook paper

Yay they kissed. Christ needs to die! More soon?

hum johnny is becoming stronger everyday when he fights christ! good for him i don't like when he is in pain and hating himself

...i feel so bad for all of johnny's friends they have to sit and watch as he fights christ...i know is really feeling some type of way since he knocked him out

You're not crazy you just have a good imagination.
Poor Jimmy he shouldn't be caught up in this. More soon?

wonder why the zacky's voice doesn't like jim...he is a sweet heart

More soon?

I loved it mroe soon?

Aww Jimmy's so sweet More soon?

I totally totally love it!!!!

You are such a great writer!!!

Keep those stories coming!!

...jimmy is taking johnny away from christ? humm wonder what that is all about...i really really really hope that jimmy doesn't die casue he is just to good in this story

wow i was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay off, but none the less this chapter kind of freaked me out...but i still can't wait to have more