Finally, they kiss! I'm back, and caught up, and eagerly awaiting another delightful chapter. I like how tightly crafted your story is. They stay on the move, low profile, and clever. Mmm, organized crime. Delicious. =)
Yes you did give their first kiss justice, so cute :) And I really do love all this action and on the run stuff Really interesting He told her he loves her!! Finally! Ahah I love their characters you really gave them alot of depth, although I was hoping Stephen would walk in on them to cause some drama, since he seems to like Elizabeth too Oh well I love all the updates!
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i just found this story and i luv luv luv it (and i ean just found it as in a just found it today and finally because they FINALLY kissed!!!) YAY I LUV THISS SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNNN
Really really amazing! I missed this story and im glad your updating again :'D I love where your going with it, love all the action. Have I told you how much i love your writing style? No? Then i'll tell you now, its amazing, it flows so expertly, you never make any grammar mistakes. Your descriptions are always so precise and beautiful, and i really love all the characters you have created :'D Updatte soon please :]
thanks for mentioning me in your authors note :] im not all that amazing, ur writing is. im excited for the chapters to come because i can tell that there is going to be some intense stuff about to happening. im excited ;]
Hello! I love the updates. Sorry it took me so long to comment though. Anyway, I did like your desison to keep it in Elizabeth's POV. That way it kind if creates a mystery in the readers mind. Well done. Your writing just seems to keep improving!
YAY, Superhero Stephen to the rescue! But seriously though, is she gonna choose Vaughn over him? I think I may cry if she does =) He should totally just ask her out for coffee, start a conversation and then kiss her, that'd work for me ;) X