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  • life.ruiners

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    im thinking that they could go back to france for a lil while.......? jst saying :] love this story
    March 9th, 2011 at 10:57pm
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    i loveeeee the drama. this story is awesomely amazing :D
    February 28th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • Music-for-life

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    yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update! i love love love love love love it!!
    February 28th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • vituh418

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    Finally, they kiss! I'm back, and caught up, and eagerly awaiting another delightful chapter. I like how tightly crafted your story is. They stay on the move, low profile, and clever. Mmm, organized crime. Delicious. =)
    February 27th, 2011 at 09:53am
  • littlelexy

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    wasn;t stephen the reckless idiot?
    February 15th, 2011 at 08:13am
  • fantastic-no-plastic

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    AHHHHH YOUR STORYY IS GREATTTT!!!!
    February 14th, 2011 at 06:51am
  • Thor

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    Yes you did give their first kiss justice, so cute :)
    And I really do love all this action and on the run stuff
    Really interesting
    He told her he loves her!! Finally! Ahah I love their characters you really gave them alot of depth, although I was hoping Stephen would walk in on them to cause some drama, since he seems to like Elizabeth too
    Oh well I love all the updates!
    February 13th, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • THfevenTH

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    I didn't think u were gonna finish the story but I'm happy ur still updating......anyways great chapters, made the story exciting to read = )
    February 13th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • Music-for-life

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    finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i just found this story and i luv luv luv it (and i ean just found it as in a just found it today and finally because they FINALLY kissed!!!) YAY I LUV THISS SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNNN
    February 13th, 2011 at 05:40am
  • AprilJazmine

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    Love, love love love love!
    That's all I can say. Really, I love this story so much! Please, please continue! :D
    February 13th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • life.ruiners

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    i love this story soo much. i love the bad-assness about it, and the sweet side of it as well. perfect mixture :D plus i like vaughn's character
    February 12th, 2011 at 11:09pm
  • Thor

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    Really really amazing!
    I missed this story and im glad your updating again :'D
    I love where your going with it, love all the action.
    Have I told you how much i love your writing style? No? Then i'll tell you now, its amazing, it flows so expertly, you never make any grammar mistakes. Your descriptions are always so precise and beautiful, and i really love all the characters you have created :'D
    Updatte soon please :]
    February 9th, 2011 at 08:43pm
  • sensiblehearts

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    Update? Just sayin :P I miss this story haha
    February 8th, 2011 at 03:16am
  • life.ruiners

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    thanks for mentioning me in your authors note :] im not all that amazing, ur writing is. im excited for the chapters to come because i can tell that there is going to be some intense stuff about to happening. im excited ;]
    January 6th, 2011 at 09:56pm
  • laurenette

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    glad to have you back
    we've missed you lol
    finally a great story on mibba lol
    January 6th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • xiluvmusicx

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    Hello! I love the updates. Sorry it took me so long to comment though. Anyway, I did like your desison to keep it in Elizabeth's POV. That way it kind if creates a mystery in the readers mind. Well done. Your writing just seems to keep improving!
    January 6th, 2011 at 04:07am
  • katediplodocus

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    YAY, Superhero Stephen to the rescue! But seriously though, is she gonna choose Vaughn over him? I think I may cry if she does =) He should totally just ask her out for coffee, start a conversation and then kiss her, that'd work for me ;) X
    January 5th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • sensiblehearts

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    Wonderful!
    January 5th, 2011 at 03:01am
  • Boron

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    Amazing updates! I love all three and I am so glad you're updating again!!!

    Keep on writing please! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:15am
  • life.ruiners

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    im glad that ur out of ur writers block. i hate writers block, cuz i get it alot too. good luck with ur other story and this one as well :]
    January 4th, 2011 at 09:52pm