Quiet Little Monsters - Comments

This is definitely one of my favorite stories online. :) I'm in love with your characters.

Just something I noticed though, in chapter two Finn says his parents are 'Glenda and Doug', and in the latest he says his father's name is 'Leon'. Haha.

Oh sheet. In a motel.... SUSPICIOUSS(:

The characters in this story are so colorful. Its nice.
Wonderful update :]

Oh nooo I just have a feeling something will go terribly wrong soon. Like Dolly said, it's the law of the world.

Oh my goodness, her mom! Dun dun dun! I think you should slap school haha! :)

Amazing, yet again:)

Your cockiness is not sexy right now...haha, I love it.

Just started reading, but it's superb.
You are such a talented writer, this story makes me smile and giggle, and have shivers.
The name 'Dolly' is very quaint and cute too.
Well done. ;]

:] This was my favourite chapter. I don't know what it was...but it was like there was a deep longing sadness in in.

wow!!! loved that chapter:)
so sweet! :))))

Aww Dolly :(
Great chappie

this story is beyond amazing and I love it in every detail possible. Unfortunately I can't express them since there are so many ;) But by the way, you are an amazing writer :) AH-mazing.

Geez, this is a tragedy! But a very cute tragedy nevertheless.

I wasn't on Mibba for a while so when I saw that you've updated I had to keep going on again :)

I just noticed I used song in that last comment.
Forgive me for my retardedness.
I meant story.

I fucking love this song.
Oh my fucking god.
You right very well.
You use words very very well.
You're descriptions are very well written.
Keep up the good work.

Ohhh my god.
This was the loveliest chapter ever ever EVER.
I don't really know what else to say.
It was just fantastic.

oh my, that chapter was beautiful
I really really love dolly and finn to death.

Awww that was so sad yet incredibly cute!! <3

what a road trip!