Right suggestions... uurm, something from Gerard's point of view would be interesting, so see if he felt any guilt or remorse at all for what he does to Frank.
Mikey's plan, now that I'm dying to see. It would be so awesome if they had some sort of intervention, like force him to sit and watch old movies of him and Frankie and then show newer footage. Maybe that would make him feel like the ass he's being!
That's all from the top of my head, but if you're ever stuck or need some advice I'm always willing to help - and I don't get offended if you don't like my ideas xD So yeah PM me if you want *grins*
Oh my love, that was awesome. Short but awesome! I'm glad Mikey is going to help. And in life, when Mikey does, if he ever, gets a kid, it's going to be adorable. More soon please.
Okay, wow. Umm, This is really good (I just found this) and Its a really diffrent view considering Gee's never violent so it just opens this whole thing of 'what if he was violent?' and stuff... I totally think (Suggestion here) that gee should hit Frank in front of Mikey then when Mikey see's this he gets upset and gee hits Mikey. THAT sets off a realization for Gee and even more so when Mikey takes Frank back to his place... ooo..okay sorry for that. Me nad my crazy imagination! hahaha
I love this story. I hate what Gerard does to him but it's like Frank loves him so much even though he does do that stuff. But I hope Gerard doesn't hear Frank talking to him. That would probably piss him off. More soon please. Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
Finally an update! It was good too, I don't like Gerard in this story though. I don't expect anyone to, if they did..then what the fuck. Lol. Okay well I can't wait for more.
New Reader. This is really good. I thought coke was stronger than escasty but I could be wrong. It would be interseting to hear this from Gerard's pov, just to see what he's thinking. More soon please?
omg......keep updating! im adicted to ur stories now, i'd give u some advice on writing better but first of all, im not really a writer and second i was too interested in the story:D xoxoxoxoxox billy
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I adore this story <3
Right suggestions... uurm, something from Gerard's point of view would be interesting, so see if he felt any guilt or remorse at all for what he does to Frank.
Mikey's plan, now that I'm dying to see. It would be so awesome if they had some sort of intervention, like force him to sit and watch old movies of him and Frankie and then show newer footage. Maybe that would make him feel like the ass he's being!
That's all from the top of my head, but if you're ever stuck or need some advice I'm always willing to help - and I don't get offended if you don't like my ideas xD
So yeah PM me if you want *grins*
Hope you write more soon!
Love Beth
xoxo